Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Simple Things, part 1

Monday, November 28, 2005

Exploring Zoe and Wash. Some takes place post-Serenity.

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Zoe woke with a start, sweat-slick skin chilling quickly against the cool air. She groped at the light switch, then scanned her bunk for remains of the horror she had so recently escaped. War nightmares. The only kind she had ever had, and the only sign of weakness over which she truly had no control. She had been on Serenity only a few months, but already she was growing resigned to the fact that the change of scene had done little or nothing to ease her troubled mind.

Something had to be done. She hated that she feared sleep, that she dreaded the cold embrace of her empty bunk each night. She pulled a robe around her body, tried to ignore the way it pasted against her damp chest. She knew one place where she could find a way around the nightmares.

His bunk wasn’t even locked, so she simply pushed the ladder down and lowered herself in. The light she let in from the corridor revealed him, naked as far as she could see, splayed unselfconsciously in a tangle of sheets. He looked so pale, almost angelic in the faint blue light.

Zoe had no qualms about what she was about to do. She had seen the way he looked at her. On the bridge, in the mess room - sidelong glances at her curves, sometimes even blatant stares at her full lips. It was probably the whole warrior-woman thing, that cliché that Zoe had come to accept with little more than a sigh. But right now she couldn’t care less about his motives. And she knew he was unlikely to question hers, given what she was about to offer him. No reason he should know that he was merely a distraction. A warm body to replace the images of friends dead and cold in the mud of the war.

Quietly and with catlike grace she moved to the bed, climbed on top of his hips, straddled the unsuspecting sleeper. He woke with a snort and she almost laughed, but the sound caught in her throat at the look that overtook his features. It was inexplicable. Surprise, a twinge of lust, but most unexpectedly...concern. He looked as though he were about to comfort her rather than tak

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ANONYMOUS
Monday, 28 November 2005 12:27
Ahhhh, River always knows. The second part is excellent - probably because I desperately want Zoe to be pregnant because it makes me less sad.

I like the first bit too, except I'm not sure about Zoe just heading on down to Wash's bunk. It seems a bit like a thing people do in stories, not something they do in real life. And we all know life on Serenity is as real as it gets. Despite the notion, your writing is beautiful. Love the imagery! Keep it up!
Monday, 28 November 2005 16:37
aaw!!!! from sex to death to baby...what could be simpler?

b
Monday, 28 November 2005 20:14
Ouch, way to turn Zoe's world upside down! Very fine piece of work, Ali D :~)
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ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 29 November 2005 19:42
Your story is beautiful. I loved the structure of it. Zoe waking from a nightmare, going into the tender love scene with Wash, and suddenly Zoe waking up again into what we realize is her waking nightmare of being alone.
I can so see it happening that way, Wash with his inuendos seeming to get nowhere with Zoe, and then one day her just pouncing (Zoe has always struck me as a take charge kind of woman once she decides to do something). It's obvious that neither Zoe, nor anyone else, saw Wash as her type (Mal included). Wash tells Saffron that people don't get him and Zoe. They're so different. She's a fighter who takes everything seriously, while he plays with plastic dinosaurs and takes nothing seriously. I could see his pursuit and humor making Zoe like him more than she lets on, but I agree with you that Zoe probably saw it as a casual thing. It was his unconditional love which made her love him.
Your imagery is Wonderful. Sweat-slick skin chilling quickly in the cool air, pale flesh angelic in the blue light, friends dead and cold in the mud of war, I wish everyone who wrote fanfiction could write as well as you do.
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 19:06
I'm glad I'm not the only one who immediately put "Heart of Gold" and that terrible, unfortunate turn of events in the movie together to heal my own sense of loss. I also see potential future movies/episodes as going in that direction, but also including flashbacks. Here's hoping the powers-that-be might be moved by your story and examine the possibilities.
Friday, 21 April 2006 02:32
What a lovely story. I love the dream within the dream and the description of wash as her protector. Very nicely done.

vaughn

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