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TEMPTATION SERIES: 37. "A Better World"

Wednesday, November 16, 2005

"Inara and Jayne drop Milo off on Dresden, solving one problem while creating another. River steps up her campaign, amusing Kaylee but horrifying Simon."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4501    RATING: 10.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "A BETTER WORLD"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Inara. Jayne. River/Mal. Simon.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "UNFORGIVEN"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Inara and Jayne drop Milo off on Dresden, solving

one problem while creating another. River steps up her campaign,

amusing Kaylee but horrifying Simon."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"A BETTER WORLD"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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At first she thought he was nervous though what Jayne Cobb had to be nervous about Inara could not fathom. Gritting her teeth she tried to block out the mercenary's words.

"Really 'Nara, you're so gorram *meili*. Could make a man go blind thinkin' of all the ways you could pleasure him." Jayne sighed, a look of bliss on his face, his imagination obviously working overtime. "Not to mention all the fun sex we could have." He paused to leer at her. "Know a trick or two in that department an' I ain't had no complaints, *dong ma*?"

"Perhaps next time you should try it when they're conscious."

The stinging sarcasm had little effect on Jayne other than to confuse him. To call it thinking would be a step too far in Inara's estimation. Hearing how Jayne really thought of her was more unsettling than flattering and left Inara feeling as if she was in need of a good long bath just to feel clean again. Who knew Jayne could be such a twisted pervert? Not taking the hint to shut the gorram up, Jayne launched into an even more lurid description of exactly what he would like to do to her. Putting her face in her hands Inara bit back a groan of embarrassed exasperation. Nothing she did or said could railroad the man awa

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 03:02
wow! River Tam is so sexy! And somehow with Mal it makes it even more so. Hurry with next installment!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 05:18
whoohooo, about freakin time. this has got to be the biggest build up in history....and I've enjoyed every minute of this dance between Mal and River. wonderful!!
angie b.
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 15:18
Entertaining combination of the crew's comedy, Milo's tragedy, and the sex, all in one chapter.
Friday, 25 November 2005 16:40
Funny chapter. Very funny. I could just picture Inara - and was that a Buffy reference I caught there? ("Duck")

Loved Simon's threat and Mal's reply. Very sweet.

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