Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

End of all things

Wednesday, November 9, 2005

Zoe remembers.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2139    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Takes place well after the events of Serenity. SPOILER alert if you haven't seen the movie.

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The silence was the strangest thing.

No running.

No laughter.

No moans of pleasure or whispers of delight.

No music.

Zoe walked the empty corridors, her fingertips running along the cool metal with the heat of a lover's caress. Her own footsteps were loud in the silence, but all she could hear was the whisper of Serenity, the building anticipation. This moment had to be perfect, had to be all she had to give.

Her first stop was Inara's shuttle, a womb of silk and incense, of wonder and caught breath. Nothing had changed in the scarlet rooms since Inara's death, not a sheet moved or a tea cup turned. Mal and Inara's wedding picture looked back from its place on the night stand, their smiles easy and their eyes full of a finding that Zoe had wondered if they'd ever take for themselves. For so long little things had kept them apart, and when they'd finally pushed it all aside it'd been as natural as breathing. Zoe had been happy for them, and sad all at once, the ghostly echoes of Wash stronger in the wake of the happy couple. She walked the rooms silently, making sure that all was set to rights before leaving, the door closing with a quiet finality behind her.

A walk through the cargo hold and she restacked the weights that had so often held the attention of Jayne and Book. The preacher's bible lay on a small table off to one side, metal bars holding it in place against the movement of the ship. It was opened with a red ribbon laying across the center of pages which were covered with River's angular scribbles, carefully taped back in place. One verse seemed to catch the eye and Zoe stopped, her fingers pressing against the worn pages. ~Peace I give unto you...~ The words were a stony contrast to the gun that was propped up against the table. Vera's final resting place. Jayne had left her there before he'd gone planetside, like a benediction on what was to come. Someh

Comments
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 06:33
Man.... what a way to have them go out. I like where the characters are in the future.... and how Zoe and Mal are zooming to their deaths of glory and honour.

Very nicely done!
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 09:33
That was just lovely. I seriously had tears in my eyes when I was finished.
Good Work!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 10:30
Beautiful story, I especially loved the little metioning of Simon and Kaylee being a happy family :) Nice to know that you let some future be happy :)
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 11:07
This was such a painful and poignant ending, Zoe and Mal going out in a blaze of glory while heroic on one level was so gorram sad on another as if they were both giving up. Having loved and lost their loved ones it was as if going on was no longer something their hearts could do. I would have loved it if River or Kaylee had stopped them and let the ship be the Big Damn Hero while whisking them both off in the nick of time to share their last days with those left of Serenity's family. Powerful stuff. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 16:21
Big damn heroes.
Made me cry.
dang it. I'm just a regular crybaby lately, ain't I?
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 16:21
Big damn heroes.
Made me cry.
dang it. I'm just a regular crybaby lately, ain't I?
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 20:58
*shares tissues with the other commentors* see, and I thought I was gonna get through today without cryin' over somethin' Firefly-related *sigh*

>__<
ZOEIWARREN
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 21:50
Awww... Thanks guys. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 29 November 2005 16:17
Wow................ thats all I can say........ wow..........
ANDREK
Wednesday, 14 December 2005 02:53
Nice, though where does all of the added stuff come from? Is this all ZoeIWarren's or has it come from other stories that I have yet to read?
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 19 January 2006 08:02
I was listening to "Into the west" by annie lenox while listening to it...

and i was moved..

you got real talent there Zoe

-BR0WNC0AT
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 19:09
OMG. I've got tears in my eyes and that isn't easy to do.

Even with the happy ending for Simon and Kaylee, with babies and everything, I had chills reading this...chills and tears.

God, I hope you continue to write because this was some powerful stuff.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 20:28
Thanks. I've been doing a job shuffle so haven't been able to write for a bit, but that dry spell looks to be up. So there should be more coming soon. :)

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