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Diplomatic Immunity, Part 4: The Central Planets Way

Sunday, October 30, 2005

Simon's past comes home to roost

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Disclaimer: All characters belong to Joss Whedon. Mainly because I haven't the courage to stick in a Mary Sue. Also because he is awesome. Will continue to live vicariously through Mal.

This is Chapter 4 of the story that began here:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=5474

and continued here:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=5523

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=5547

and is a continuation of Our Co-Pilot Tam, which can be found here:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=5386

It would be very shiny if anyone could tell me how to stick in actual links.

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A silence descended over Serenity's cargo bay, as if the engines had suddenly turned off and the steady hum the crew had become used to had faded. Zoe and Jayne turned as one, to stare first at Simon, then at his father, then, confusedly, at each other. Simon looked over at Inara, then back to Gabriel, a look of deep shock on his face.

“Welcome home, Simon,” Gabriel said, holding out his hands.

“Home?” Simon looked around, confused.

“This is your home, you know,” Gabriel replied.

“But...River--” Simon stammered.

“It seems I should apologize,” said Gabriel, stepping forward. “You were right; I was wrong. Bringing the Miranda Tapes to light was the most important thing you could have done with your life, Simon. More important than becoming Head of Surgery. Who knows how many lives you helped save?”

“Dad,” Simon said, approaching him. “I—It's good to be home.” The two Tams fell into a hearty embrace.

After a long time, Gabriel pulled away. “And River?” he asked. “Where is River?”

“Ahh...she...” Pain clouded over Simon's face.

“Is she alive?” Gabriel asked intently. “You did rescue her, didn't you? After all?”

Simon nodded. “They did things to her, Dad,” he said, “Worse than I imagined. She can read people's minds—no, she can't stop reading them. They induced paranoid schizophrenia in her, drove her insane—half the time,

Comments
Sunday, 30 October 2005 21:20
Well, this is certainly an interesting development. I'm a little surprised that your interpretation of Gabirel is light handed. Personally, I always saw him as a tragic figure, who would rage at Simon and Kaylee before congratulating them.

But I'm still eager to see what will happen next. Just out of curiosity, what do you think of YOU CAN'T GO HOME AGAIN?
Sunday, 30 October 2005 21:25
Wow... All there is to say. Please i need more. I love the story line, i love the character development, everything moves smothly. Its Great. You keep writing and ill keep reading.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 30 October 2005 21:55
Reginaroadie: I'll comment on You Can't Go Home Again.

As to "light-handed," the last sentence of this chapter sets up the conflict among the once, present, and future Tams, as well as encapsulating my interpretation of Gabriel.
Sunday, 30 October 2005 22:14
Er, that was me (Anonymous). Thought I was logged in.
Sunday, 30 October 2005 23:34
I would love to believe that Gabriel really does see the error of his ways but am concerned about what will or will not happen when their father has another surgeon remove the block. Not that I don't trust him, but to use a phrase of the Captain's... I don't trust him. What's to stop him finishing what the Academy started? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 19:02
Nice chapter, although I have to say that I don't think Gabriel Tam would, after all the time that has passed and all the things that you've said he's gone through, be as shady/shifty as you've started to portray him. However, I'll keep reading to see where you take this story.
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 17:44
gabriel kinda came across as pushy and kinda rude to me (but hey, that's just me)

love this fic, 'specially mal gettin' all protective over his lil' albatross

b
Friday, 04 November 2005 05:44
Ooh, so some of you think he's nicer than he might be, others that he's shiftier/ruder. I must be doing my job!

What I'm going for with Gabriel is pretty much that--he's pleasant and cheerful as long as people are doing precisely what he wants, and he was that way before Simon rescued River. He sees the whole River thing as a grave factual error on his part, but not a reason to change his basic modus operandi. I wouldn't call him shifty--he's adept at using the weapons at hand, but will totally use all of them. Given the legal system, he's rather straightforward.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 November 2005 02:04
Shiny!

( oldtransu... can't be bothered to log in)

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