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TEMPTATION SERIES: 31. "Visions"

Friday, October 28, 2005

"The passenger settles in. The Captain and crew discuss their options. Kaylee decides it is time to go after what she wants."

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TITLE: "VISIONS"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Wash/Zoe. Kaylee/Simon.

RATING: NC-17.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "THE PROMISE"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The passenger settles in. The Captain and

crew discuss their options. Kaylee decides it is time to go

after what she wants."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"VISIONS"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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It took less effort than Milo expected for him to convince Serenity's Captain to take him on board. Not sure if it was just the money that swayed it but Malcolm Reynolds seemed a mite distracted and that worked to Milo's advantage. *Wode ma* he would have gone down on his gorram hands and knees if that was what it took. The woman had shown him the only path that would lead to a positive conclusion and Milo was ready to take it with both hands. Grab on to it until the life was squeezed out of him. Wouldn't be the first time he braved some inferno or other for a treasure not of man's making. The dreams were still a mite disturbing though, the faces not all as clear as he would have liked. If he could have done so he would have dragged the woman with him but that was not part of the bargain and even had he opened his soul to her and begged she would not have come.

As his few bits of precious were stowed away in the guest bunk the knock on his door disconcerted Milo more than the prophecy had done. He cleared his throat as quietly as he could, not wanting to show any sign of the nervousness creeping into every cell of his body. "*Jinlai*."

It was somewhat of a shock when Serenity's prim and proper doctor stepped into his bunk. Simon watched Milo intently only s

Comments
Friday, 28 October 2005 19:44
Good answer to the question, "How can a telepath not know what's going on?" Funny, how it's almost the same answer to the question, "How to keep Simon from finidng out he's on track for a baby." And love the mysterious Milo.
Saturday, 29 October 2005 12:09
Whoo! Simon's having a time of it and no mistake!

Milo - an intriguing character. Not at all sure what to make of him.

I liked River being a bit more vulnerable with regard to Mal in this chapter. Up until now, he's felt like a lamb to the slaughter. I like River being a bit uncertain too. Although, when you're a mind-reading genius, uncertainty must be hard to come by!

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