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TEMPTATION SERIES: 28. "Strategy"

Wednesday, October 19, 2005

"There ae times when two heads are more confusing than one."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4261    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "STRATEGY"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "UNDAUNTED"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "There are times when two heads are more

confusing than one."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"STRATEGY"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

"You need a strategy, River. You have to go slow - be subtle. If you come on too strong he'll run so fast you'll get whiplash."

River smiled softly and for a moment Inara envied her. Had she ever been in love? Or dreamt of it? "I can be patient." The girl in a woman's body assured with a nod as if taking a solemn oath by speaking the words out loud. "I've waited six years."

The Companion's breath caught for a moment. Maybe this would work after all. But if it failed Inara was counting on weeks of highly entertaining amusement at the Captain's expense. Then she saw the frown form on River's face, the happiness momentarily clouding over. A glint of warning sparking in her eyes.

"I don't want to hurt him, *dong ma*? This isn't a game."

And just like that all Inara's notions of petty one upmanship were swept away. No. This wasn't a game. And if she played it like it was not only Mal would pay the price, River would too.

* * * * *

The Captain was confused. Something was different but he couldn't put his finger on it. It was late. Pretty much all his crew had turned in for the night. They were headed for Pacquin following a wave from Badger. Seemed he had something wanting picking up from there and transporting back to Persephone. Fortunately Wash confirmed they had the fuel to cover both trips though th

Comments
Thursday, 20 October 2005 02:00
dang it man! why did you have to go and kill the baby... but good story so far...
Friday, 21 October 2005 08:07
OMG! Poor Zoe. Poor Wash. Argh. Can't bear it.

Now, as you know, River isn't my preferred choice for Mal (*g*), but the scene between the two of them was very sweet. And I liked Mal's reflection on Simon's unhealed wounds. Especially as the two of them are very similar in that respect - and in the way they try to fix others to the neglect of their own selves.

I loved Kaylee in this - I'm sure she really would be like that, praying in a child-like way.

But the baby dying? Ouch.
Monday, 20 November 2006 17:52
Yep, not a very good reviewer at all, but I had to comment on the beauty of the scene between Mal and River on the bridge. Lovely interaction. Like how incorporate the Albatross nickname into this story. And it's really sad about Zoe loosing her child. Especially her reaction to it. :(
Friday, 12 January 2007 16:41
Ohhhhhh. Beautifully captured agony.
Friday, 04 November 2011 02:05
OMG.... poor Zoe:((((((!!!

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