Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

None so Blind (Parts 7-10)

Friday, September 30, 2005

COMPLETE. Good things come to those who wait. Eventually. And only if they really try. Mal/Simon SLASH hurt-comfort

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2659    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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AN: You're all really great with the reviews! Hope if you've stayed you enjoyed the ride so far, and the payoff doesn't disappoint. (If you don't want to read R-rated stuff, stop after they leave the dining room at the end. But it's my first sex-scene, so pretty mild!)

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Part 7

'Simon? Can you take a look at Jayne’s arm?’ Zoë asked.

Mal was sitting up at the end of the infirmary bed, trying to keep track of whose injuries Simon had and hadn’t dealt with yet.

‘Metal in it,’ River observed with a gloomy interest. Whether she was talking about Jayne’s arm or some injury of her own, Mal couldn’t tell.

This hadn’t been the best of days. It had begun at four a.m. ship-time with a screaming fit from River. Then the new job, the one that he had felt unaccountably uneasy about, had ended in every member of the crew bar himself with some injury or another. He still wasn’t entirely sure what had went wrong, the cargo had been delivered and paid for, but someone on the dustbowl planet seemed to have taken against them. Jayne had assured him that he had never been on this planet to steal vast amounts of money and nearly spur off a workers rebellion, so that option was out.

Simon had been working for three hours now, laboriously stitching up knife wounds and a few bullet grazes, and checking concussions. ‘Is that everyone?’ he asked, voice strained.

Mal had a sudden troubling thought. If everyone on the crew had been in the fight, what about... ‘Simon?’

‘Yes, Captain?’ The boy was at his side in an instant.

‘Did you...’ There was a crash.

‘Simon!’ Kaylee shrieked.

Mal crawled off the cot and reached for Simon. Ignoring the twinge of humiliation, he felt about the floor until he hit Simon’s shoulder

Comments
Saturday, 01 October 2005 01:07
That was incredibly beautiful the way you put Mal and Simon together. Such tenderness between them that it was something very shiny. And everything came together so well. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
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Thursday, 17 November 2005 07:32
Great story; very sweet. Any plans for a sequel? Maybe Mal taking care of Simon, instead or something? (Anything?)
Saturday, 01 July 2006 05:09
Well done. Your voices for the characters are very good and your story's timeline flowed nicely. Thanks for the ride ;-)

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