Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Home on Serenity

Thursday, September 29, 2005

This is my first ever Firefly fanfiction. Thank you to Rock, Angelica and Phaedra for acting as my beta readers. You're the best!

I selected the genre of romance, as the story focuses on the relationship between Mal and Inara. But I fully intend to continue with the other characters. Please enjoy and give your feedback!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2675    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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May contain spoilers for some episodes…and some of the comments might not make sense if you haven’t already seen them.

This is intended to be a stand-alone story – however, it will connect with future stories to dig into the pasts of each and every character. Eventually. :)

HOME ON SERENITY - Part One

Kaylee was attempting to sob quietly. Zoe rested a hand on her back to comfort her, but she couldn’t think of a thing to say. Soothing wasn’t a part of her military training.

“Why does she have to go?” Kaylee asked between hiccups, dabbing her eyes with a blanket from her cot.

Zoe smiled a little, “You’ve always told her she should leave and settle down with one of her rich suitors.”

“But she doesn’t have one at the moment! Sh-she’s just leaving us!” Kaylee cried even harder and Zoe sighed. There was no use trying to explain Inara’s decision to leave Serenity. In truth, it had been a shock to everyone, including the beautiful companion.

Both women were startled when Jayne appeared in the doorway of the engine room. “Duìbùqî. River’s headed this way… Skippin’, or somethin’ else crazy-like. Case you don’t want her around none.” He shuffled his feet slightly then met the teary eyes of the mechanic, “Ni meí shì bà Kaylee?” She was surprised into silence, the sobs stopped immediately. Jayne wasn’t known for his genuine concern.

“I’m fine, Jayne. Um, thanks.” She looked like she wanted to say more but didn’t. When he’d left the hall, she glanced at Zoe in confusion.

“Mèimei, the captain does trust him – on occasion. Can’t be all that bad. Besides – he’s had a soft spot for you ever since that Fed put a bullet in you. Fear can make a man act all kinds of strange.” She was thrilled that the hired gun had shocked the young woman out of her depression. It was starting to get on her nerves – and she hadn’t had a free minute alone with her man all day. Wash was confined to the helm, keeping an eye out for the Alliance, as Persephone would be crawling with them. The

Comments
Friday, 30 September 2005 08:46
lying in wait for part 2!!!
Saturday, 01 October 2005 01:00
Very much enjoyed part one and wondering where the good gorram you're taking us. Well done! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 October 2005 02:38
Awwwhttp://www.....Mal/Inara goodness. Helps make up for the scene we didn't get in the movie. *sigh*
Write more soon! :)
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 October 2005 03:47
When they finally come together it will be a great day!!!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 08 October 2005 04:58
An acute eye for the give and take 'twixt Mal and Inara. She gives something of herself, and his response to it is spot-on. And vice versa. VERY nicely done. Example: ~Let her believe it was about morals. He cleared his throat a little overdramatically, successfully drawing a hint of a smile on Inara’s lips. His eyes settled there for too long and he had to shake his head to redirect his thoughts. Morals – sure.~ Niiiiiice. The whole gorram thing is as shiny as can be. More, please. Really. Gotta have it.
-Roving Eye.
BELLONA
Thursday, 20 October 2005 17:47
*sniffle* so sweet...*bursts into tears*
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 10 November 2005 05:05
Oh such sweet Mal/Inara goodness!!

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