Blue Sun Room FICTION - MYSTERY

China Doll - Chapter 4

Friday, September 23, 2005

Inara's memories only come to her when she dreams, now she dreams of heartbreak.

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Author’s Note: See I told you there was a 4th chapter coming in sooner rather than later! This chapter comes with a warning. While there is nothing explicitly SPOILERISH in this story, this story may allude to events that take place in the movie. Let’s call it Serenity Foreshadowing. This will not by any means ruin the film for you, as I do not allude to the actual results and circumstances of events in the film. I am just warning you, if you are that sensitive to the minor possibility that you may be reading a story that has something remotely to do with the movie, then stop now, and read this on the 1st of October.

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She was warm. It was a beautiful sunny day, a classic summer day on Artemis. She could feel the grass between her bare toes; it tickled the backs of her legs when she sat on it. Her sun-dress was roughly 5 shades lighter than the sky. She was happy.

He picked her up from behind and spun her around and around, feet flying through the air. Centrifugal force was pulling her feet to the sky. Her giggles filled the air; a child’s melody flowed out of her. She was free.

Her father had been a handsome man, with dark hair, and olive skin, but with eyes as blue as the second moon of Artemis. Those eyes usually held sorrow, a secret of things left unsaid. When he was with her they filled with pride and joy, she was the one thing he had done right in a lifetime full of wrong.

She was his little princess. She appeared as a near carbon copy of her mother, but with his personality traits, hard-headedness, perfectionism and feisty determination. He wished he could offer her more than this tiny planet in the middle of nowhere.

He had once been important. He had once made a home on one of the more civilized worlds. As he moved up the power chain from simple police man to Security Council member he traveled through all of the places where the finest men in the ‘verse lived. He was cruel, he was ruthless, and the system repaid him for every piece of it

Comments
BELLONA
Friday, 23 September 2005 16:15
just makes you wanna hug her, don't it? i can just imagine 'nara as a lil' girl...sweet!

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SUVIE
Friday, 23 September 2005 16:23
Really, really enjoying this story and looking forward to future chapters.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 September 2005 18:28
Wow. That's an original take on Inara's backstory, one I like quite a bit! Jacob, Ling and.. Book! Very exciting!

Killer last line!
Friday, 23 September 2005 18:30
I always felt that Inara seemed so much older than her years, and I figured only something truely tragic happening in her childhood could do that to such a beauty.

I thank you guys for the feedback, and I promise to get another chapter up as soon as I can!! Thanks!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 24 September 2005 03:48
poor nara *sobs*
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 24 October 2005 17:44
Oh, it's been a month now... when will there be a new part?? Good things should happen frequently!;)
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 25 October 2005 16:02
Sorry! With my constant viewing of the movie I have been so very busy! I promise to get new material up in the next few weeks. I've been suffering a bit of writers block, so I figured you would rather wait for something good, then get something crappy cos I'm out of ideas!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 26 October 2005 07:48
"Out of ideas" sounds very ominous...

I suppose you are right. I'd rather wait for the usual thrilling quality than see you rushed. *g*
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 15:55
I'm not out of ideas per se, I am trying to organize them and make them coherent. I am going to work on it this week, so there should be something new!
Sunday, 04 December 2005 22:56
Oooh, this is a cool series, I love it!

All that wonderful Inara backstory. Jacob Serra is a fascinating character and I love how he informs the person Inara is today.

Ihope it's not putting too much pressure on you to say I'm looking forward to more. :)
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 22:44
By any chance do u kno a domincan guy from new york named Jacob Serra? I'm tryin' 2 get up wit him.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 21 February 2006 22:46
If u do kno a Jacob Serra? plz contact me at Washington1776_2002@Yahoo.com
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 30 March 2006 15:35
I've been reading a lot of fanfics lately, especially the older, completed ones (you don't have to wait for the next chapter that way), and I found this one. I've really enjoyed it, but I didn't realize that it's not finished. Argh! Please write more, especially considering how Chapter 3 ended!

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