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Going On

Thursday, September 22, 2005

Okay, here's what was going to be the first chapter of a post-Serenity-movie fic, but is now, sort of my one-shot, open coda to the film. Hope you all enjoy. :-)

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Ashrah was surprisingly lush for a border moon, a fact River Tam noted with a whispered smile, viewing the green landscape of the sizable clearing through Serenity's front windows. And despite a cloudy night, she could still crane her neck and see stars twinkling through. She drank in fully the scents of the moon's foliage and the harmonious calls from its nocturnal wildlife that wafted onto the bridge.

Weren't as if she had a choice, but just this once, there would be no cursing the Alliance doctors who stripped away at her brain. The only feelings coming from this place were ones tranquil, natural...and simple. A rarity in life; Serenity's especially. Meaning both the Firefly-class ship itself, as well as the now six others who made it a home. Though presently, she sat in the pilot's chair, very much alone.

Not Wash's chair, no. Only the captain sat there, which happened far from often; yet when he did, he took great care to avoid disturbing the dinosaur figurines along the rim of the console. She wondered where Wash had gotten them, what significance they'd held. Nostalgic toys from childhood mayhaps, or simply an impulse buy at a small, outer world market for amusement's sake. The latter fit, if that was the case.

Hoban Washburne was the kind of man who'd tried to bring levity and lightness to most situations, and flying for weeks in the blackness of space was a situation always welcomed a laugh or two. Even a smirk would do. Didn't matter what the cause, or how ridiculous--if it broke the tension of an argument or the stir-craziness brought on by a long journey, then it was worth the occasional, odd look.

And what was funnier than long dead, monstrous creatures who may or may not have roamed prehistoric Earth-That-Was, before succumbing to deadly pits of tar?

River had assumed piloting duties since Wash's death a month ago, but she knew this bridge was still his, and would remain so until the day Serenity could no longer float. She was just happily filling in, as she and the ship related qu

Comments
DAHLIAINE
Thursday, 22 September 2005 19:20
Seriously, I love this story.
Thursday, 22 September 2005 23:37
Very nice, a much better chapter length this time. Look foward to what comes next.
Friday, 23 September 2005 00:51
Thanks for saying so. :-) It was a lot of fun to write. The last scene especially.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 September 2005 01:11
great job. characters are spot on. far and away the best post-movie fic I've read...
Friday, 23 September 2005 09:02
great fic.

completely ruined the movie for me, but still...

thats my own fault. I should have waited just a week longer...
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 September 2005 09:15
This is terribly engaging to read! The character voices are spot-on, and in particular your treatment of Zoe is downright moving. Her quiet strength, the heartbreak she's holding so close inside, and the way she is still giving of herself to others and able to let them give to her. It's all very subtle but very beautiful.

And I am in awe how you managed to build and hold that sense of anticipation and hilarity at the end, from River's and Mal's conversation, through Simon and Kaylee to Mal and Inara finally meeting up. Very well done!

I am looking forward to the next part!!
Friday, 23 September 2005 11:38
missjasadin--geyahh. I'm so sorry anyway. Glad you liked and all, but, I'm so sorry.

Both Anonymouses--thanks. :-) Got a big smile on my face.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 06 October 2005 14:50
Woah! This is good stuff. I agree, the character voices were spot on, and I loved the story of Wash and his shadow puppets. I can't wait for more!

- Soul
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 21:01
LOVING IT! WRITE MORE!...please? heh
Friday, 11 November 2005 02:50
Sweet, loved Kaylee's comment :P

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