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Twice As Nice - Chapter 4: Good Eatin'

Saturday, September 3, 2005

Health Warning: This fic contains an insight into Jayne’s mind. Those with nervous stomachs may wish to poke their eyes out. And others...well, you have been warned.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3337    RATING: 7.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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After collecting her duffel of belongings from the passenger dorm and transferring it to the empty berth in the crew quarters (“Best we keep you an’ the doc far apart as rightly possible,” Mal explained), Jaine was given the guided tour of Serenity by Kaylee.

She memorised every detail of the ship’s layout as they walked, Kaylee chattering away happily about Serenity and the adventures of her crew. Jaine found her pleasant enough, more so than the rest of the motley bunch anyway. She found herself grinning and joking with the enthusiastic young mechanic.

“So, how’dya know Zoë an’ the cap’n anyhow?” she asked.

“Joined the Independents few years afore Serenity Valley.”

The girl stopped and looked at her, eyes wide. “You was a Browncoat?” she asked in awe.

“Not 'fficially, no. Just kinda joined ‘em one day an’ nobody said nothin’ ‘bout it.”

Kaylee looked like she was going to say something else, so she decided to change the subject.

“How’d you know Reynolds an’ Zoë?”

Kaylee’s cheeks flushed and she began fiddling with a patch on the leg of her jumpsuit.

“Um, well, me’n th’old mechanic, Bester, we was, um, well we...an’ the cap’n, he...” She looked up at her with a sheepish expression. “Cap’n walked in on me’n Bester, y’know...” she gestured with her hands and widened her eyes meaningfully.

“Ah,” Jaine replied understandingly. “You were y’knowin’, huh? Yeah, Mal did that t’me once, walked in on me’n Tracey y’knowin’...gotta habit’a that, ain’t he?”

“You knew Tracey?” she asked with a frown.

“Yep, take it ya met ‘im, then?”

“Kinda, he...” she trailed off, looking unsure.

Jaine looked across at the other woman. “He did somethin’ stupid

Comments
Sunday, 04 September 2005 16:09
fun! rite more! now!
Tuesday, 06 September 2005 10:43
YAY!!! someone commented!!! i'm dancin' in my lumpy, school-issue seat...ow!
Wednesday, 07 September 2005 14:14
i don't wanna know...
Wednesday, 21 September 2005 20:29
can i have marshmallows with my co-coa?

wow. jaine fits in perfectly. i forsee many more interactions between her and simon and/or jayne. golly! i'm excited!

i will say that from the wording in your other peices i thought that kaylee was aquainted with jaine as well. but then that's just her sweet, sweet nature!

also- huge kudos for the tracey moments. they were funny and meaningful. i would pay to see the two women reminising about a man that played such different roles in their lives.
Wednesday, 05 October 2005 01:30
Good story, might rely a touch too much on dialogue, but I might be wrong. I liked Jayne's internal monologue. Since Jaine is a new character, please add more description of her, other than Jayne thinks she's a fine piece of booty. :)

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