a short story of ALL WE NEED IS LOVE
Tuesday, December 16, 2003
It has been three months since Inara had left, and mal had become a mess and kaylee could see that,but kaylee was about to do something that evertyone would regret but in the end mal and kaylee would want it more than anything.
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 4567
RATING: 3.0 (PG13)
SERIES: FIREFLY
Ok this isnt them full story this is more or less a short story,the real story prbibly wont see until april but this will tell you what to expect in the future.
ok lets start the story is focused on Mal and Kaylee and I know what you're thinking dosent match well thats the beauty of it,
the story takes palce a few months after OBJECTS IN SPACE,and as you suspect mal is a mess, to tell you the truth mal barely spekes any more, and the crew can tell,
kaylee one day kalee comes up with a idea but its so far-fetched she barely believes it herself,she decides that the only way that mal will get better is tho give mal her body wich in meaning means she will sleep with him as much as he wants,when she offers to her suprise he and as well there first night together this pattern continues untill mall makes a visit to Inara in witch causes an unbelievable night if suprise and bitter sadness to Kaylee,with mal coming to Kaylee that same night and all most a case of attempt of rape, the crew becomes suspicious of the two with late night vists and strong wieredness between the two
All of a sudden Mal starts to show of felings and a strange want for cuddling,
few weeks later Kaylee goes to visit Inara, Mal with strong saying of NO, Maylee goes any way,a few weeks later a strange message is promted serenitys intercom that a wild fire has spred over the same city that Inara Kaylee is staying at, Mal panics and takes the closest shuttle to find a very suprised Kaylee,Mal takes kaylee abord and back , two months latter the crew if serenity thows a party for Wash and Zoes anavesery party were Kaylee soon finds out the she is pregenet but even moe supriseing news Mal askes Kaylee to marry him.
Well thats as much I can tell you I know thats alot but believe me there's more, I know its not well writen but I think the story is more important, well this is more of chapter one two and mabe three . So I have alot of writing to do so thank you and goodbue
Tuesday, 16 December 2003 15:02
Whoa. Quite a plot you got there. Still, pretty good though. Do I really have to wait for April?
Tuesday, 16 December 2003 22:00
The short story sounds great, I can't wait to read the real story, please have lots of detailed sex scenes between Mal/Kaylee.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 05 May 2004 15:32
Kaylee and Mel have a father/daughter relationship nothing more. The idea of them getting together let alone having sex it disgusting and wrong.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 20 May 2004 22:45
please use a beta next time
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 27 May 2004 19:13
It's a good idea. I love the thought of Kaylee andMal together. She's so sweet and he's moody and sexy. They play off each other well. It would be more of a twist them together, rather than Inara. Kaylee is more a real woman and I think she loves Mal secretly.
Friday, 04 June 2004 16:51
Like the plot. There are just not enough Mal/Kaylee fics out there :)
Hope you finish and post your story soon!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 22 August 2004 08:00
The reader who complained that Mal/Kaylee's supposed father/daughter thing is a fact is dead wrong. That would be in your own mind, dear, and not necessarily in the minds of the rest of us, perverted though our cranial vaults be. If you're reading NC17 or adult themed fanfics, you've got to be expecting this sort of thing, and if you're twisted in a lovely and highly enjoyable way like most of us in here, you LIKE IT! Heh-heh. That's why I'm here...the getting-it-on by odd pairings of some of my favorite Firefly denizens is a moist and sticky sweet treat. Only complaint here: This short explanation of what the writer says might be a future story is disappointing. Where's the story, Love? Please get going and deliver forthwith!
--Roving Eye (in full verse tonight!)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 14 April 2005 00:28
Mal/Kaylee is my OTP.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 28 July 2005 02:57
i cann't wait to read the rest of the story
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