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TEMPTATION SERIES: 13. "Mistaken Mercies"

Wednesday, July 27, 2005

"Jayne gets more than he bargained for when he goes a-whoring. The Shepherd tries to come to terms with what happened and put things right."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4604    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "MISTAKEN MERCIES"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Jayne. Mal. Book. River.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "PENANCE"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Jayne gets more than he bargained for when

he goes a-whoring. The Shepherd tries to come to terms with

what has happened and put things right."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"MISTAKEN MERCIES"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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He thought he had died and gone to gorram heaven. All the cravings his lust filled mind could imagine and then some. Jayne moaned, the lips and hands on him showering him with bittersweet delights that made him weep into the mouths that worshipped him. Spilling his fecund seed had never been such sweet torture. While his mind and body writhed in bliss the twin agonies that excess had unleashed had him crying out. Greta was merciless and gifted. Shauna gentle but no less demanding. And Frith was so eager that what had been blatant unleashed lust on his part was quickly torn away from him until everything spiralled out of control taking more than his willpower with it.

Gorrammit, he had never had so much tasty all at once before. Waking was a novel experience in their hands. The drain on his energy bringing him a smile of deep satisfaction as his smile turned into a happy grin. Once they had finished they left him to recover in his own time. The bedcovers were strewn all across the floor, the bed empty of all but the mercenary's sated bulk. Jayne lay back in an undisciplined sprawl and scratched his belly. Slowly acclimatising himself to the notion of getting up, washing then making his way back to the ship. Rutting *diyu*, he

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 27 July 2005 19:24
Loving this - as I do all your stuff. Keep goin'. :-))
Ms.Sam
Wednesday, 27 July 2005 20:25
Shiny Salvations Bell-girl!! That was nicely done.

Keep flyin',

K
Wednesday, 27 July 2005 23:14
Very cool so far, not sure I want to know whats happening to Jayne. :)
Thursday, 28 July 2005 13:59
More than the usual number good lines - "independent of her friends while dependent on strangers". And it's good to see the plot move along. Thanks!
Wednesday, 03 August 2005 11:17
Saintly, saintly Mal!

*breathes again*

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