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TEMPTATION SERIES: 8. "Timing"

Tuesday, July 12, 2005

"The crew go down to rescue Mal and Zoe. After all the excitement is over Inara notices something the others seem to have missed."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4748    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "TIMING"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: G.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "WAITING"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The crew go down to rescue Mal and Zoe.

After all the excitement is over Inara notices something

the others seem to have missed."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"TIMING"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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The leader of the bunch was a man named Briggs, he took pleasure watching his men disarm Mal and Zoe. Zoe looked sick. The Captain tried to reassure her with a look but she wasn't buying it. This was bad. The only good thing was that they hadn't been killed. Briggs stepped in close to the Captain, all smug assurance now. He nodded to one of his men, Cassidy, and gave a spiteful little smile. "Tie him up!"

Cassidy grinned and got some rope then began to tie the Captain's hands behind his back. Making sure the chord was tight enough to cut into his wrists. "What about her?"

Briggs let his eyes travel slowly up and down Zoe's body. Her look promised a very painful and torturous death. He seemed to get off on the fire in her. The Captain didn't like what he was seeing in the man's eyes. Or the way Briggs' thug Cassidy was running his hands through his own pockets, undoing buttons and checking that Mal had nothing hidden of value. "*Wei*! No need for hands on, we came to do a job, *dong ma*? If you don't need the job doin' then let us go, no need for unpleasantness."

The leader turned and spat at the Captain. His look ugly. "You'll get paid for comin' but not in coin."

Mal was really worried now. What the good gorram was Briggs going to pay them for and what

Comments
Tuesday, 12 July 2005 21:17
Ah, you DO have more story! Very enjoyable!
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Wednesday, 13 July 2005 17:10
I've been away and returned home to your wonderful new series. Thank you for the shiny reading material. I love the River/Mal dynamic.
Wednesday, 13 July 2005 17:16
Ooops,wasn't logged on. The above comment was from me, Cliomuse.
Tuesday, 02 August 2005 10:27
The whole range of everything that's perfect about Firefly here. Dark, scary, seemingly hopeless scene of being trapped, followed by the triumph of the crew pulling together.

Then the funny, sweet, promising ending. Adored Simon's flustered "But, Kaylee,it's the middle of the day!" and everyone finding that funny.

And poor clueless Mal. ;-)

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