Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

TEMPTATION SERIES: 6. "Healing"

Friday, July 8, 2005

"It comes as something of a surprise to realise that the Captain isn't the only one who needs to heal."

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TITLE: "HEALING"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Zoe. Mal. Jayne.

RATING: G.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "CONFESSING"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "It comes as something of a surprise to

realise that the Captain isn't the only one who needs to

heal."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"HEALING"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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The Captain woke slowly, the light sluggishly pulling him up from the darkness. Everything felt kind of stretched and yawing, his focus wandering before he could get a grip of it. The warping of the infirmary around his Iris's slowing then coming to a stop. He blinked a couple of times to wash the grit and almost concussive effect of induced sleep from his eyes. The infirmary. Right. That meant... the *tamade baichi* had shot him! *Wode ma* when he got his hands on that lying, cheating, back stabbing *heisheoudang liumang*...

"Good to see you awake, sir."

He blinked again. Zoe. "Where's Jayne?"

Her expression darkened, a murderous rage barely concealed behind a dark wall of control now showing dangerous cracks around the edges. The only thing that held that wall in place was the fact that he hadn't died. When she didn't answer immediately Mal frowned.

"You kill him already?"

She shook her head. The flash of regret in her eyes real enough to cool him down a little. "No, sir. Figured that was your job."

Right. Fine. Just what he needed. More decisions to make. "I wanna see him."

"I don't think..."

"Not askin'. Wanna see him here, now. *Dong ma*?"

Zoe nodded and left. Simon remained silent, watching the Captain as he fussed around him. River got up from a

Comments
Friday, 08 July 2005 18:24
Now, you usually flag a conclusion so I'm wondering ... if it IS the end, it's a sweet one and rings true.

I had a moment's alarm at Jayne saying the money wasn't enough but it was swiftly quelled with "Then I got thinkin' it wouldn't ever be enough".

And Mal's "Who says you're gettin' off that lightly?" was a perfect invitation to stay. It salvaged some of Jayne's self-respect by turning what was pure generous forgiveness on Mal's part into a chance for Jayne to redeem himself further.
Friday, 08 July 2005 22:41
Excellent as usual Alison.

A real shocker about Jayne turning on Mal, but the repentance was so well written. And the explanation about it being a split second decision made it seem so much more likely.

I really could picture Nathan lying there and Adam by his side 'fessing up.

I'm guessing this isn't the end, as this all started with a chapter about River and her feeling for Mal....


Saturday, 09 July 2005 12:58
Beautiful, and a beautiful end to a good story. You got another one like this?
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Friday, 29 July 2005 16:09
I am loving this. You have their voices down pat ... I can actually hear them saying the words. Such an interesting take on that other shoe dropping and now Mal knows he doesn't have to worry about Jayne ever again. Thru me a bit when Jayne shot Mal but you fixed it so quickly in the next chapter. Whew (wipes sweat from brow). Looking forward to the rest of the chapters. Patti
Friday, 12 January 2007 14:38
>She frowned hard at him. Wishing he were well enough for her to shake him until his gorram teeth rattled. "Maybe we got you the wrong kind of doctor, should'a got a psychiatrist."

I know EXACTLY what she means.

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