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TEMPTATION SERIES: 5. "Confessing"

Friday, July 8, 2005

"Zoe wants to end Jayne for what he's done. Jayne turns to the Preacher in his hour of need."

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TITLE: "CONFESSING"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Zoe. Mal. Jayne.

RATING: G.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "HURTING"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Zoe wants to end Jayne for what he's done.

Jayne turns to the Preacher in his hour of need."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"CONFESSING"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

It was weeks later. Wash had set a course for New Hope and Jayne had taken it as a sign. He wasn't even startled when the Shepherd climbed down into his bunk and stood in silence while he finished packing. Only when he gave the room a last check to make sure nothing was being left behind did he turn to look at the Preacher. A grave and quietly humorous man who lit Jayne up with joy every time he laughed. He was going to miss him. Gorrammit, he was going to miss them all.

"He's going to live you know."

Jayne nodded. His words like the nod came out abrupt. "I know."

"You don't have to leave."

The mercenary glared at the Preacher as if the man were brain damaged. "I tried to kill him! Took the money from the job an' planned to start over."

"But you didn't kill him." Said Book mildly. "And I have to wonder about that."

The unexpected comment robbed Jayne of words. Stole most of his anger too. "*Shenme*?"

"Why didn't you finish the job? You could have been home free."

"Ain't ya been listenin'? Didn't ya see the hole in his gut? Or maybe you're waitin' for me to draw a gorram picture for you."

"No," Said Book with a patient half smile on his face. "I'm waitin' for you to tell me why you came back. Why you cried as you held the Captain in your arms."

Jayne turned his

Comments
Friday, 08 July 2005 18:15
Nice on the relationship between Jayne and Book. And the way Simon sees Jayne. And I could really feel Zoe's anger and determination to get rid of Jayne. Liked Wash in this a lot too.
Saturday, 09 July 2005 12:52
This is some of your best writing. Nailed the characters, even while going someplace new with them. And you did it with dialogue instead of exposition. This whole series so far has been very interesting, and this was the best part. So far. In my opinion.
Friday, 12 January 2007 14:34
The scene with Jayne confessing has more build and tension than most good erotica - very hot.

>Silence fell then Zoe left the bridge. Wash stared after her for a moment then turned back to his console. His eyes lit on two of his favourite dinosaurs - a tyrannasaurus rex and a brontosaurus. "This is why we don't have children."

And so, so true, and sad, and wise.

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