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TEMPTATION SERIES: 3. "Listening"

Friday, July 8, 2005

"River convinces the rest of the crew that something is horribly wrong. Now all they have to race is the clock."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4995    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "LISTENING"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Kaylee/Simon.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "TRUSTING"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "River convinces the rest of the crew that something

is horribly wrong. Now all they have to race is the clock."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"LISTENING"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

Hot so hot. Bodies oiled by perspiration, fueled by desire. Simon moaned into the heat of her mouth, Kaylee arching into his touch as the pleasure mounted, his thrusts slow and languid, a long withdrawal then a more rapid re-entry making her gasp. Eyes widening, lashes fluttering like insect wings against her cheeks. "Simon," She gasped. "Want you..."

He did not reply nor did he speed up, was enjoying it too much to reduce their love making to a quick frantic tumble. No he wanted to savour this, make it last as long as possible. The hand that reached him seemed to agree. Only it was not simply slowing him down it was tugging him back. Away. Simon blinked, Kaylee cursed and began to beg but her husband was distracted. The incongruity somehow penetrating his haze of passion until attention diverted, he turned his head. His eyes widened at what he saw.

"River! What the...?"

"Simon, hurry."

"I was. We were just..." His brain seemed to catch up with what he was saying and her presence in his room. "River, what are you doin' here?"

"Need you."

Kaylee managed to get enough air in her lungs to join in the debate, her voice ragged and panting. "I need him more."

"No, *ni bu dong*."

"River, just let us finish first and then I'll..."

"No, Simon. You're not l

Comments
Friday, 08 July 2005 17:25
The little touches of humour (Mal thinking at least death means Zoe won't be saying "Told you so" and Kaylee's "Jayne's a good shot") just make the darkness darker.

Please don't let Mal die!
Friday, 12 January 2007 14:14
Oh, really good. I'll have to look up the rest now!

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