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STOLEN MOMENTS: 36. "Final Assessment"

Wednesday, July 6, 2005

"Gradually everything gets back to normal again with the realisation that nothing will be the same."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4651    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "FINAL ASSESSMENT"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Mal/Inara.

RATING: NC-17. Series **CONCLUSION**

STATUS: SEQUEL to "LOOSE ENDS"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Gradually everything gets back to normal again

with the realisation that nothing will be the same."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"FINAL ASSESSMENT"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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It was an odd sensation for the Companion. She was sitting in the commons area with Kaylee and the whores in the padded armchairs and sofa set aside for relaxing. Carla was cradling baby Zack, Emma holding one of the twins - Christian - while Evie played with Lucy. Anna rocked a quietly sleeping Trisha while Kaylee did everything but salivate at the babes. Had she not thought it would upset the mothers she would have insisted on holding first one then the other but Inara had quietly suggested waking them when they were dropping off to sleep was a recipe for disaster. Plus she privately did not know how it would affect the Captain's mood having four wailing babies on board. Carla watched the way Inara looked at them, as if measuring and weighing them in her mind before speaking. It did not annoy or offend her. She had spent her whole life being looked down upon by better than the Companion but that was not what Inara was intending in her estimation. 'Course it was only a theory.

"Don't know how to thank Mal enough, comin' along when he did." Carla said in seeming innocence.

Kaylee beamed. "Yeah, the Cap'n may act all kinds of grumpy an' stern but he ain't nothin' but a big gorram softie at heart ain't he 'nara?"

For a moment it looked as if Inara would no

Comments
Wednesday, 06 July 2005 20:21
Very cool, I wait with baited breath for hopefully a epilogue to this story.
Friday, 08 July 2005 16:51
Very sweet ending. Even if the thought of River being able to feel what Mal was feeling with Inara was all manner of creepifyin' but the way you paint River that wasn't voyeurism on her part - more like she's listening to music, appreciating the light cheerful sounds now after so much dark.

Liked snarky Simon and poor old frustrated Jayne. Just as well he wasn't listening to that conversation between Kaylee and River or he might just have killed Mal out of envy!

Friday, 08 July 2005 22:50
A happy ending for Mal and Inara! Thank you Alison :=)
Friday, 08 July 2005 22:52
You're welcome! About time our Cappy had something to smile about. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 21 July 2005 00:21
That was a great ending (and long too)
But i wish it wasn't over cuz it was great! Gonna go off to read Temptations now! YAY
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 11 November 2005 03:19
Awww yay happy ending for Mal and Inara! The way it should be! lol....but yea have to say River tuning in is CREEPY! haha but thats river!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 23 November 2005 17:10
I just finished this story- and wanted to say if you are still checking feedback on it- that I loved it!!

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