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STOLEN MOMENTS: 32. "Illumination"

Friday, June 24, 2005

"The crew go back for Mal and River. Badger gets more than he bargained for. Simon discovers something disturbing."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4164    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "ILLUMINATION"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "THE LOST ONES"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The crew go back for Mal and River. Badger

gets more than he bargained for. Simon discovers something

disturbing."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"ILLUMINATION"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

Everyone was on the bridge when Wash brought Serenity in to land as close to St. Thomas's as possible, the palpable tension in Simon leaving each of them on edge. Jayne still thought it was a bad idea but as everyone was ignoring him he watched and listened in sullen silence, purposely avoiding looking at the Preacher. Not wanting to see any hint of censure in the man's eyes. Book was the closest thing Jayne had to an actual friend. Almost a father confessor though he never completely opened up to the man. Always held something back as if giving himself an escape route should it all get too messy. Never was much of a one for discussing feelings or motivations. He left all that kind of introspection to them as didn't have jobs to do. It was weird the way things had snuck up on him. Hadn't meant to stay so rutting long. It was all their *shenjingbing* Captain's fault. If the man hadn't impressed him so much with the way he had handled the attempt to riddle him and his second with bullets and steal their boat he would not have gone along with him. Wouldn't be standing here now staring out at a place he in no way wanted to return to but couldn't seem to leave.

No one seemed to notice the mercenary's lapse into deep thinking, all of them too taken up with formulatin

Comments
Friday, 24 June 2005 11:51
Very cool, looking as always forward to your next chapter.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 June 2005 15:14
Yep. Mmmhmm.

More please.

STEVEthePIRATE
Friday, 24 June 2005 16:45
I really like the idea of River "censoring" Mal's thoughts. Very shiny. I look forward to more.
Friday, 01 July 2005 17:18
Jayne was a joy - as ever in your hands. Loved his internal monologue - and his assessment of Mal: "equal parts smart and stupid." I adore it when so few words say so much about characters. I can really understand Jayne's perspective and see how wrong it is at the same time. And it gives a very neat assessment of the complexities of our dear Captain.

River's announcement that she's an assassin was very touching - compared with the other kids whose talents were being used for more peaceful (if not good) purposes.

Nice cliffhanger too.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 05:34
Poor River.

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