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Delia Cycle # 6- Desperate Times

Thursday, June 9, 2005

After a risky job for Patience, Serenity is shattered by news from Europa.

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Desperate Times ( Delia Cycle # 6)

by Maura F.

( Standard infringement disclaimers apply...I write for love, not profit. Of course, Delia would disapprove! )

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"I've got some bad news."

Mal looked up from the handheld computer before him. The Mess had been quiet, until Wash and Zoe had arrived. He had been shopping the Cortex for something for Delia. He wanted to get her something special, to celebrate two years together.

"What's going on?"

"We got a wave...from Patience." Zoe said.

Mal's shoulders sagged as his head dropped toward the table. That was bad news. Patience was a powerful woman nearly running all commerce on Whitefall. The last two times he had dealt with her, he had gotten shot during a post transaction scuffle. Anything Patience wanted with Serenity was bound to be bad news.

"What does she want from us?" Mal asked warily.

"Water."

"Huh?"

"Whitefall's in drought time. She's having trouble gettin' or makin' enough water to cover the crop she' growin'. Wants us to bring water to her." Wash said.

"The crop? Let me guess...Patience has illegal tobacco growin'. She's gotta be awful desperate to ask me to do somethin' for her. Thirsty tobacco would do it. " Mal said.

"She stands to profit well if she can get it to the outer rim. If it makes it to maturity." Zoe observed wryly.

"Hold it. Water? We ain't a tanker transport. How she expect us to haul water to her?"

"Well, she mentioned gettin't from St. Alban's." Wash said.

"Ahhh...water. Solid water." Mal said.

St. Alban's was one of the coldest terra formed moons. It was cold year round, always covered with ice and snow.

"Whad'ya want me to wave her?" Wash asked.

Mal thought about it for a minute. If they helped Patience out, it could help repair the shaky bond he now had with Patience and her considerable sphere of influence. But, he could get shot again. Or worse. If they chose to ignore Patience's wave, he could probably count on a peaceful time of it...without many pros

Comments
Thursday, 09 June 2005 17:30
Excellent, can't wait for more! My only gripe would be you having Kaylee lash out at Mal for drinking when it was believed Delia was dead. Kaylee is a much finer person that that and her love and loyalty to the Captain would not turn her so mean at such a painful time. The first part where she wants to comfort him is the Kaylee we know and love. I love how the whole crew is preparing to go into Reaver territory to get Delia and the other women back and it was very touching to see how affected Jayne was. Nice touch having the Preacher offer to say words over the graves. I also liked Captain Miller and how Delia fought back is so in keeping with the spirited gutsy lady you have created. Very shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 09 June 2005 17:50
Thanks...Please read my post for more info. But on Kaylee's reaction, remember she's been seeing Delia as a mother figure for a while. Kaylee's no dummy either- she knows Delia is dead ...while Mal's instinct to shut out the truth is to get drunk, I see Kaylee "defense mechanism" as anger. Anger at Mal for not "making" Delia live on Serenity with them. Anger at herself, knowing she herself wouldn't have been able to stay alive against the Reavers. Kaylee doesn't want to admit the truth that those around her are acknowledging...however they express it.
-Maura
Thursday, 09 June 2005 20:53
Just a little something of a minor critic. a .44 is a measurment for most rifles and hand guns in the US and is a very big round. But shotguns are rated in gauges which is totally diffrent. A .44 cal would actually be a very small shotgun, normally as I said they are rated in gagues the most common being.
20 gauge which is a small game one
16 gauge also typicall a hunting one
12 gauge is the common size used by the police and military
final a 10 gauge which is huge and not rightly sure what they use them for as they are huge.

Anyways just thought I would share since you mentioned Delia's shotgun being a .44
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 June 2005 22:15
Very emotional. I didn't cry till Jayne did...

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ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 June 2005 23:22
Great work! Can't wait for the next installment! Ooh, I just love this story, I can't stop reading it.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 June 2005 20:56
These stories keep getting better and better! I love your work...please write more soon. Delia is an amazing woman, perfect for Mal and I hope she survives. Great idea putting the comb and medal in Buddha's lap.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 06 September 2005 12:28
I'm a little disapointed wit this series. Delia carries aome definite Mary-Sue characteristics, too perfect, liked and devotedly referenced by all...
Tuesday, 06 September 2005 16:04
Hi Anonymous from Tuesday the 6th...

I can appreciate your comments. I hope you read my blog "Thanks for the Warm Fuzzies"

I've definitely acknowledged the Mary-Sue factor, but I really made a point of keeping myself out of Delia. I saw that the woman who held Mal's attention would have to be well liked by the crew, as they are his family. She's strong, too. My friend said Delia is "Betty Crocker with laser sights." That made me laugh, but I don't think she's perfect. She is flawed, just as damaged by the war as Mal is. Funny, everyone presented by the show has been damaged by the war...except for Zoe.

The overwhelmingly positive feedback I've gotten from this series has been great...but I want to nod to the occasional negative, too. Don't think "methinks the lady doth protest too much"
I can see what you are seeing.
But hell...you liked the series enough to read all six! That says something.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 27 October 2005 06:20
Hmmmmm, long over due for Delia Cycle #7 don't you think?
Wednesday, 04 October 2006 19:00
I'm disappointed...that this is the last of this series. Please, write again soon.

Fav part: Mal, Jayne & Zoe in Delia's house, and also in the theater. I could see the scenes in my mind's eye like it was a movie.

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