Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Patchwork: Part Three (final)

Sunday, May 29, 2005

Simon has his suspicions that River has been manipulating everything since the moment they left Serenity.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2265    RATING: 10.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author's Note: One of my friends really wanted this to be slash, which is why I was divided, but it just wasn't working for me with this story so I kept it gen. I may write a slash sequel or a kind of epilogue for her, but as it is this part works as an end and a standalone gen story. Thanks again to everyone that reviewed, it's much appreciated, and I'm sure the first part of the story would still be sitting neglected on my hard drive if you hadn't helped motivate me to finish it…

"On the bed," Simon said to Mal. He walked to the counter and pulled out a syringe, then he grabbed a bottle of clear liquid and filled it up. He glanced back up at Mal, who hadn't lain down and was watching him. "The bed," Simon said again.

With a frown, Mal moved over to it. "You're not stickin' me with anything," he said shortly.

"Well, considering you're my only way off this ship, that would be stupid, wouldn't it?" Simon asked vaguely. "I want you to pretend to be unconscious."

"Why?" Mal asked.

"Because Claine told me to sedate you," Simon said, tapping the needle of the syringe before slipping it up his sleeve. "We can't afford a firefight, Mal. Just trust me."

Mal glared at him. "You don't trust me," he said. Simon paused, not sure how to respond to that, because he wasn't entirely sure that Mal wasn't right about that.

River, who had been watching the whole thing with amusement, shook her head. "Simon will get us out the door," she told Mal. "From there we can get back to Serenity." She grinned at him, widely. "Play dead."

Mal grumbled a little, but laid back and closed his eyes, going still. Simon hit the release on the door. "It's done," he said to Claine. "He was reluctant to let me inject him with anything, but I was able to convince him."

Claine gave an acknowledging snort and pushed into the room. Simon was surprised to realize he actu

Comments
Monday, 30 May 2005 00:32
Excellent! A good ending that works and I just loved all the crew interactions. Sad though that even at the end Simon didn't really get it, didn't realise he is a part of Serenity's family now - crew. Maybe he can't stop them getting hurt but he can use his skill to keep them alive just like Kaylee keeps the heart of the ship beating. And I just loved your River. Thanks! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 30 May 2005 06:51
Nice, now I hope you do a follow up series following this one. *hint hint wink wink*
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Monday, 11 July 2005 02:55
Awesome job! This was a fantastic read and I hope that there will be more from you soon.

As a slasher, I love reading anything with Mal/Simon undertones and this one did have plenty of them even if it was just a Gen. I love that River was there to look out for her brother especially since he's the one always trying to look out for her and everyone else.

I do hope we'll see more works from you, I would love to see Simon in trouble somemore and Mal or the crew helping him out.

LOVELY!!!! JUST LOVELY!!!

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