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"Waiting" Mal's POV

Saturday, December 14, 2002

Facing death - it's the waiting that kills

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"Waiting"

Mal POV, short

Disclaimer: Joss's, not mine

NOTE: This is a little piece not meant to be taken seriously. I'm just taking news like everyone else is, and angry that these wonderful characters are gone. This is an outgrowth of the

frustration.

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It's the waiting that kills you, I hear.

Our latest job turned sour. Of course, several of the townsfolk decided to try and help by pleading out case to the local law. They told them that they'd been watching. Well, towns are nasty on this rock - Aniesel, I think it's called. Six factions run this place, and the gang wars are hell. Fourth-Biggest contracted us for a little job. All we had to do was land, pick up a shipment of ore they'd "obtained," and get it to processing on the next moon.

Of course, Zoe would be the first to remind me that "routine" jobs in this line of business rarely are. Now, I'm nursing one nasty headache in their filth-ridden jail, trying to remember how we got ourselves into this mess. Yes, we're all here. They even have the Tams in a cell with Book. Surprisingly, they've been quiet. I'm supposing Book's got his Bible for times like this. I suppose Simon and River figured Death would be following them, being fugitives and all. All Serenity was to them was a stay of execution.

I'm feeling really sorry for Inara, though. Three miles away from the brawl, and she gets snapped up along with the rest of us just for being on Serenity. She's in with Kaylee across the hall. The trial's behind the door at the end of the hall. Here, a man isn't allowed to speak in his own defense. Others have to speak for him.

Who needs aliens? We're weird enough for the whole damn universe.

Anyway, where was I? Oh, explaining how all nine of us came to be occupying the local jail. Simple really. We get the contract, signed with fourth-largest gang. Third-largest gang swoops in, backed up by second-largest gang.

Needless to say, there was a brawl. Guns got

Comments
Monday, 23 December 2002 14:31
Shiny. Can't wait to read the ending, when UPN gives our crew a good home. When. No "ifs" allowed here. :)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 27 December 2002 01:57
I am with ThatGirlIsabel. No "ifs" allowed in my vocabulary when it comes to FF.

Great story - we all know how he feels.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 13 August 2003 18:08
I'm with ThatGirlIasbel, too. When it comes to one of my favorite shows, I have no idea what "If" is.

On another note, this was good, really. I can understand how he feels. Very imanigitive

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