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Sunday, April 10, 2005

What happened to Wash after the crew rescued Mal in ‘War Stories’, and River reveals another strange ability.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2304    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Serenity's cargo hold never looked quite this good before…well, no, it looked even better a couple hours ago, except I couldn't properly appreciate the beauty then, but it looks pretty shiny right now, what with the Captain back on board, everyone's safe and the Doc said Mal will be alright, at least after his ear gets put back on and I could just kiss that rusty old boat and it's all shiny and maybe I can sit down now, before my head spins any faster, except that Zoe is saying something about getting the ship away from here, now, at least I think that's what she's saying, my lip-reading's pretty rusty and it's starting to occur to me she probably wants *me* to get Serenity away from here and that would probably be a real good idea if I didn't feel so wiped out right now. Not my best day, really. Might be my worst day, I'll have to think on that one, but not now, I really can't think right now and Zoe is getting a little jumpy, she looks worried and I don't want her worried, Mal’s more than enough for everyone to worry about so I better try to figure out where my legs are and make 'em move in the right direction. Which is…man, I wish my head would stay still…that way. I think. But I must be going the right direction because Zoe looks a little less worried and the others don't even seem to notice so I think I'm getting away with it.

I've had some serious hangovers before, hell, I was known for hangovers in pilot school, but I've never felt like this. Whoever put the weights in my shoes, very funny, you can get 'em out now. And speaking of drinking, some water would be good right now if I didn't think my gut would explode. My gut's never hurt like this before, I guess that gorram guard hit me harder than I thought. Who am I kidding? Never been gut-punched before, for all I know that tza-ziao duh choo-sheng was a lightweight. At least I didn't toss my lunch. I think Mal might have been a bit impressed with that. For a second. If he even saw…damn, how can he take ten of those punches and still dish out his own? F

Comments
Monday, 11 April 2005 07:05
cool.
i liked it. i guess the fact is that we didn't see much of wash after the attack on niska's skyplex. it makes perfect sense that he would be more injured than we suspected.
anyway it was very good. i especially liked how river controlled wash's emotions.

no power in the verse
xoxox-fedikayllow-xoxox
Monday, 11 April 2005 17:19
Excellent! So nice to see a post-"War Stories" Wash. You had all the characters spot-on and Zoe's reactions made me chuckle. As for River being able to calm Wash, I really could see her having that kind of talent. Very neat and totally shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 12 April 2005 13:40
I agree, Wash is a battle-newbie; so he's not built for the varsity beatings. The humor is pure Wash, and the "creepifying River" ability is a nice touch.

Thanks for filling in "War Stories - the Getaway"

Keep Flyin',

K
Tuesday, 12 April 2005 15:43
Thanks for the encouraging words :) This is my first venture into the Firefly-verse, and I always worry about my characterizations, esp. in fandom debuts. Art is easier :D
Sunday, 30 April 2006 18:08
Nice work. It was interesting reading about Wash in the 1st person.

What does "tza-ziao duh choo-sheng" mean?

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