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STOLEN MOMENTS: 4. "Secrets"

Monday, April 4, 2005

"Kaylee and Simon spend some time on Baltimore. River informs the Captain of something they have in common."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4646    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "SECRETS"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Kaylee/Simon. Mal. River.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "WATCHING"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Kaylee and Simon spend some time on Baltimore.

River informs the Captain of something they have in common."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"SECRETS"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Kaylee couldn't understand it, she really couldn't. She knew Simon liked her, had even felt a rush of something a time or two along with more than a few sparks, but it was as if there was an iron lid fastening down his emotions so nothing could leak out. What in the nine hells was he afraid of? That she would hurt him? They were walking around a bazaar on Baltimore. Inara had a client here and the Captain had figured it was far enough off the Alliance trade routes to be safe to stop and replenish their food stocks. Kaylee had been surprised and excited when after a brief recon with Zoe and Jayne the Captain had returned and given them permission to stretch their legs. Simon had been hesitant, fearful even, but after assurances that it was safe had relented. Then to Simon's confusion River had promptly changed her mind and stated she didn't want to go planetside after all.

Maybe that was all it was. The fact that River was back on Serenity and Kaylee had dragged Simon out to explore. Shepherd Book smiled across at the mechanic, his muted amusement like some secret they both shared that Simon was unaware of. Then Jayne caught up with them and he and the Shepherd wandered off leaving Kaylee and Simon to browse and talk. Or more accurately, Kaylee to talk and Simon to pretend he was lis

Comments
Monday, 04 April 2005 20:07
Mal a reader?!? Woah, Ali! Okay, you've got to post the next part soon! I'm really anxious now! So many exclamation points!

- Soul!
Monday, 04 April 2005 20:29
Not to sound like I'm repeating SOS, but Mal a reader?!? Damn...I did not see that one coming at all! I'm still in a state of shock. Wow... I can't wait to read the next chapter in which I will hopefully find out more details concerning Mal's reading abilities.

Okay I'm still blow away, but I'm going to try and comment on the first half of this chapter.

I really loved the Kaylee/Simon interaction. It was a sweet moment of lovely fluff. I hope the mechanic won't get the good doctor into too much trouble when they "find someplace outta the sun".

Ali, this story is so unbeliveably good. Keep up the awesome work!
Tuesday, 05 April 2005 10:59
This is what's so good about Firefly - the echoes and reflections within the characters. And you're working that really well in this fic.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 10 April 2005 18:00
I missed the part where River donned her boots.

Aw, never mind. Truly awesome form.

PV
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 11 May 2005 22:56
*giggles* that was sweet! I love the story!
Monday, 23 May 2011 01:39
Wow! That was really good! more more more!

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