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COUNTDOWN TO CHRISTMAS: 23. "Heaven's Door"

Thursday, March 24, 2005

"Zoe pieces it all together while Serenity's crew rally around Sarah. The fallout for Sarah and Mal is not quite so shiny."

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TITLE: "HEAVEN'S DOOR"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Mal/Sarah.

RATING: PG-13

STATUS: SEQUEL to "THE LONGEST JOURNEY"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Zoe pieces it all together while Serenity's crew

rally around Sarah. The fallout for Sarah and Mal is not quite

so shiny."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"HEAVEN'S DOOR"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Wash Warren stared at his wife in undisguised disbelief. "What you're sayin' *bao bei* is beyond *shenjingbing*. You have to be mistaken!"

"Trust me, *zhangfu*, I wish I was."

The pilot blinked then looked at the cortex screen again. They were in shuttle 2, half the crew off searching for Sarah, the other half moving about the ship like ghosts. This revelation simply adding to the feeling of unreality. Wash took in the details of the girl. Just a slip of a thing really, not much more than seven, slender as a beanpole with lively eyes and long dark brown hair. Even though the message was 'live' Zoe insisted the girl had died before the War. Gorrammit, was there no getting away from the gorram War? Wasn't it enough with the Captain living and breathing it without his wife doing the same? But he didn't have it in him to speak his thought aloud knowing he would hurt her and he couldn't do that to Zoe for anything in the 'verse. "You have to be wrong, sweetie. If this was her she'd be, what? River's age? Kaylee's?"

Something in his gorgeous but deadly wife's demeanour tightened but he had no idea why. "Never said I could explain it, Wash, though I do have a theory."

Wash blinked, his mind churning through the events of the last couple of months. A horr

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Thursday, 24 March 2005 17:24
Good Gorram, Ali! You're killin' me here with all the suspence. And I thought I was good with the cliffhangers. I've been busy for a while, so I just read through the last few chapters in one sitting, and I couldn't stop. I'm supposed to be working, too!

I'm dying to know just what Zoe is thinking about Niska still being alive, and I can't wait until the next chapter.

More!!!!

- Soul
Thursday, 24 March 2005 17:40
WTF? That was me above. I'm logged in, though...
Thursday, 24 March 2005 20:35
The more I read this, the more and more I really want to be the one to kill Niska for good. Maybe you can write me into the story. "And out of the sky leaps KaySky. Flying through the air with a sword in her hands, her angle is just right so that the sword meets Niska's neck. That was all it took. One good swoop and the man's head rolled down the hill." Yeah okay, that's not going to happen, but it makes me feel better by saying it.

I loved this chapter like all the rest. Please don't keep me hanging too long before your next post. Great Job!
Sunday, 27 March 2005 09:56
Just when I think you've put Mal through every kind of torture, you come up with a new one! Ooh, that Niska! You've done a great job on him.

I was glad to see Inara's part in the abortion cleared up - I was worried Mal was going to strangle her! I liked the post-operative scene with Mal and Simon too - Mal upset, Simon knowing and pretending not to notice. Very in character.

And I see there's another chapter up! Saving that for tomorrow ...
Thursday, 03 November 2011 05:30
Oh that Niska is one *tamade hundan*... Great job on this!!

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