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COUNTDOWN TO CHRISTMAS: 18. "Dancing With The Devil"

Thursday, March 10, 2005

"Jayne keeps the children safe. Meanwhile a vengeful enemy presents the crew of Serenity with a chilling ultimatum."

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TITLE: "DANCING WITH THE DEVIL"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13

STATUS: SEQUEL to "BLOOD OF INNOCENTS"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Jayne keeps the children safe. Meanwhile

a vengeful enemy presents the crew of Serenity with a

chilling ultimatum."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"DANCING WITH THE DEVIL"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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It was not so much a cellar as an underground store. Where once grain and animal feed had been packaged and stacked there was now little more than the musty aftermath of generations of neglect. Yet the cellar was more bunker than store. Little Kirsty's eyes were shining even in the dim light as the hatch closed over their heads. Fourteen children aged from five to eleven, every one of them like taut bowstrings trembling with excitement. Jayne spoke softly, telling them stories his ma had told him as a boy, weaving a safe little world for them far away from what was going on above. River had not returned, made no attempt to see where they went or what they did. Jayne did not know whether to be flattered that she trusted him or annoyed at her lack of interest. Either way he was glad she was gone. It creeped him out how that girl seemed to look right inside his head. Wasn't natural.

Now though he had other worries. Instead of being punctuated by gasps and cheers, his words were shaken by a distant thunder that was coming nearer and nearer until even Jayne Cobb let the words taper away. Fourteen pairs of eyes looked at him, all trusting and innocent. Made him almost chok

Comments
SUVIE
Thursday, 10 March 2005 20:36
yep, ready for the next chapter already. no clue on how you do what you do with words, but please do not stop!
Thursday, 10 March 2005 21:20
I like the way this is going - More plotting and less sufferring. A little surprised Niska's so focused on Mal that he neglects to consider torturing him through Sarah. Nevertheless, one of your best chapters, Alison.
Thursday, 10 March 2005 22:16
Ali!!!! Gosh, you so torture me. Leaving me hanging when things are up in the air!! Is Mal okay or is he still sick? What is Simon's plan? Is Niska finally going to get a well deserved kick in the ass?

AHH!!!! I NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!

And on a less hysterical note, GREAT JOB!
Friday, 11 March 2005 10:31
Yo! Go Simon! I'd love to see that last exchange filmed ... "You're going to have to do exactly as I say". I can just imagine the look on both their faces! More!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 11 March 2005 11:28
Ali!!

How could you stop there??

Please hurry up with he next installment .
Friday, 11 March 2005 22:29
This is one good novel here, Ali, and I think your portrayal of Niska is worthy of Joss himself.
Friday, 11 March 2005 23:15
Artships, there is no point trying to torture a comatose man by using his friends. Also, as mentioned by Zoe in "War Stories" as vile a creep as Niska is he has his own code. He made a deal with Mal and the Captain broke it ergo Mal is the one he wants to take his pound of flesh from and redeem his reputation. Thanks to everyone for your shiny comments, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 12 March 2005 01:13
Loved Simon's last bit! Could just see Mal's face hearing that.
Monday, 04 April 2011 23:28
as ever, taking a page from Joss's book, leave them in jeopardy so we're sure to come back. so glad i get to read it all at once...
Wednesday, 02 November 2011 20:25
I LOVE Simon!!!! He and Mal on the last part... PRICELESS!!!XDXD and I'm really loving Jayne with the kiddos, how protective he is(:

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