TITLE: "PAYBACK"
AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL
FANDOM: "FIREFLY"
PAIRING: No specific pairing.
RATING: PG-13
STATUS: SEQUEL to "FRIENDS AND ENEMIES"
ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.
FEEDBACK: Welcomed.
EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com
WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html
SUMMARY: "Sarah makes a decision. Alex Trent begins to
see flaws in his plan too late to escape the consequences."
The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'
are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.
No infringement of copyright is intended.
"PAYBACK"
A "Firefly" story
Written by Alison M. DOBELL
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The spaceport was shabby, pretty much nothing but a landing pad with a few aging ships rotting on the apron. Shara-li pulled a face. "This is *it*?"
Her friend ignored her tone, eyes looking left and right, head tilting up and down, as wary as a cat on hot bricks. "I told you, he'll come."
"Yeah, an' I'm the Queen of all Londinium!"
Sarah shot her a look. "Queen maybe, but *all* Londinium? Dream on, *jie jie*."
"There's still time to go back. We can say you took sick."
"No. You go back, my ride'll be here any minute now."
Shara-li nodded. Truth to tell she was getting as nervous as *diyu*. At first it had seemed like some big gorram joke but her friend was serious and as that little fact sank in she realised nothing she could say or do would stop her from doing this. The least a good friend could do was make sure the ride turned up. If it didn't she could still get Sarah back without them both losing their jobs. The sudden whirr and updaft alerted her to the flaw in her plan. The transport, such as it was, had arrived. Shara-li's mouth dropped open in shock. "You have got to be kiddin' me?"
"Beggars can't be choosers, *jie jie*."
"But you got money, I know you have. Surely you can get better than this girl?"
"Not where I'm goin' I can't. Now, you g
This is all manner of intriguing, and I'm desperate for the next installment Ali. Please hurry!
How DO you do do this? One long story after another, each of them really well written, well planned and well executed with numerous twists and turns to keep us readers guessing.
Thank you for sharing with us
Hazel
You've done it again. This story contiues to amaze me. I knew something creepy was comin', but Niska? Yikes! Now you've really got my attention.
Good God, this is a great story! So many twists and turns, all executed perfectly. You've pulled me in here. What will happen when Sarah finds Mal, and what will happen when Mal finds Alex?
And where in the good gorram is Jayne Cobb?
- Soul
Well handled. This is, or very shortly will be, a full novel...about 15,000 words shy of it now.
Speeding onto the next chapter.
(hope you got my email Ali)
I so love the way you write, AliD
Yup, that's Mal alright!
Simon blinked. Boy? The *Captain*? Then he realised that in her eyes they were all little more than children.
I love that, it's so meaningful about different perspectives... And Mal really is so young...
SHINYSHINY*SHINY*!!!
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