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COUNTDOWN TO CHRISTMAS: 8. "Collecting the Pieces"

Sunday, January 30, 2005

"When Mal and Monty return to Shadow they find the last thing either of them expect."

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TITLE: "COLLECTING THE PIECES"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "OPEN WOUNDS"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "When Mal and Monty return to Shadow they

find the last thing either of them expect."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"COLLECTING THE PIECES"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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It felt strange landing back on that hell-hole of a planet again. A place that had once been home, so full of good and happy things it almost felt sinful for anything to be that gorram perfect. Now all he saw was the externalised wasteland of his own heart. Hopes and dreams ripped right out of still beating flesh then stripped of everything that had once made life so rich and vibrant. The mess that was left devastating him with a grief that could not be put into words. Monty knew. Understood. His heart crying out with the injustice of it and synchronised in silent accord with the painful beat of Malcolm Reynold's own aching and beleagured heart.

Monty had wanted to tell Mal not to do it. Not to go but his friend meant too much to him for a lie to sit well between them. He couldn't do it to the man. Respected him too gorram much. The only good thing about going back was the heavy snowfall that now left the ugly scars hidden under a deep blanket of white. Perhaps his friend would change his mind? See the way the harsh clime had reclaimed the now ruined world and would let it rest in peace. But no. Whatever else Malcolm Reynolds was he was no coward.

"Don't know what ya hope to find, Mal." Monty ventured quietly.

The man in question showed no sign of having heard him, eyes st

Comments
Sunday, 30 January 2005 18:14
"Rollicking good fun!"

*wipes a tear or two from an eye or two*

Absolutely no disrespect intended. Mere (immature?) defensive reaction to emotional outburst. You sure know how to pull on those heartstrings.

Truly enjoying this. Thanks!

Sunday, 30 January 2005 20:38
This story keeps on getting better and better with every new segment.

MORE!!!!
Monday, 31 January 2005 01:08
The image of a desolated Shadow as representing Mal's own state of being worked very well.

Still not sure of the whos and whys of the extra characters but happy to see some of them coming together.

And good on Zoe!
Monday, 31 January 2005 16:08
Ali, you've got a talent at creating seemingly seperate events and characters and then brilliantly bringing them all together with heart-wrenching perfection. I know it's already been said, but this just keeps getting better and better. More!

- Soul
Tuesday, 01 February 2005 10:49
Lovely Simon/Kaylee scene - so very gentle and sweet. Some great Jayne in there too. Have always loved the way you portray him.

Fascinated to see what transpires with Shara-li's friend and the Captain. Think the poor man's in for a few more shocks before this tale is done!
Friday, 04 February 2005 00:27
I have a feeling this thread could become canonical. As in, adopted into the Official 'Verse.

You are that good. This is that good.
Monday, 31 October 2011 02:27
O.M.G. So. Gorram. SHINY!!!!! The Simon/Kaylee scene was so sweet, amongst all the sadness! Well done!

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