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Person, Place or Thing?

Thursday, September 18, 2003

Simon, meet your sister...

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Notes: Thank you to eatstake and Scott for shiny betas! Written for Firefly Friday challenge the fourth “home.”

Person, Place or Thing?

by liquideyes

A young boy in a crisp, white shirt under a dark, brocade vest walks with his hand firmly in the clasp of an older gentleman dressed much in the same fashion. The pristineness fits, even if the colours don’t. To fit in, they should be dressed in white, or navy blue. But the man walks purposefully, knowing where he is heading. Restrained excitement is evident in each step. The young boy’s blue eyes are wide, trying to take everything in. But he is also trying to be careful, trying not to gawk, as that would not be appropriate. And he did not want a lecture when he returned home. But the boy observes: people being fixed, and people doing the fixing. And he feels an irresistible pull. He might have gravitated towards the doctors if he was not firmly attached to his father’s hand. And he knows that it would be improper to disturb them by getting in their way. These people are all busy, doing important things. Making people better. But the pull is strong. He could see himself dressed in a white gown. He knows that one day he would not simply be here for a visit, that he could find a place here. One day, the hospital would be home.

The man finally reaches his destination, and father and son enter a room. A woman, with a gentle, tired smile lies on the bed, cradling something small in a pink blanket. “Simon, meet your new sister River,” says the man, his voice full of pride. And the young boy, forgetting decorum for once, speeds to the side of the bed and climbs up to carefully sit beside his mother. Her arm goes around him, as she asks if

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 18 September 2003 06:40
BC

This is really sweet.
Thursday, 18 September 2003 11:22
This was a lovely little Simon piece, you captured his essence in a very short story and I liked his instant reaction to meeting River. Nice, thanks. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 20 September 2003 16:30
Loved it i am crying
Tuesday, 02 December 2003 02:33
Beautiful. I liked the beginning where you don't necessarily know it's Simon (But I bet we all did), which was really cool. Where you first meet River, sort of.

Keep writin', kepp flyin'.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 04 May 2004 11:49
It is a good story
Wednesday, 21 September 2005 16:52
cute ickle river baby!!!

b
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 00:43
AWWWWWWW

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