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Firefly - Kaylee's Last Stand

Tuesday, January 18, 2005

Serenity mechanic, Kaylee Frye, has contracted a deadly disease, can the Captain and the rest of the crew find a way to save her before it's too late?

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Firefly - Kaylee's Last Stand

(Set after Objects in Space)

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The strawberries sat in the galley on the tabletop. The crew stared at them in utter horror. There were the tops of half eaten pits mixed in the with the fresh red berries.

"What do we know?" Malcolm said cooly. There was a slight tremble in his voice, so barely noticable that only Zoe picked up the tone inflection.

"Poisonous" Simon said simply, completely deflated.

"How bad?" Wash asked. His hand reached down and clasped Zoe's. He knew it was bad.

"On the outer rim worlds, its common with some of the crops. The chemicals used to enhance the speed of growth, sometimes they mix with the new Alliance pesticides..."

"What does that mean? To us. In simple language?" Inara asked.

Simon couldn't speak. His head hung low and he stared at his shoes. His hands wrung together tightly, a common tic of his when he was frustrated.

"It's called the 'Green Death'" Book said after a long pause, "Because the crop chemicals are green colored. Tell them son. Go ahead, tell them"

No one stopped to wonder why Book knew so much about Alliance terraforming and crop techniques. Not anymore that they questioned his knowledge of weapons, spaceship design and aspects of noted philosophers.

"I've seen three cases of it on Osiris. All from ships that had it and came running for help. It's airborne transmitted after the patient has been exposed and the infection reaches its latter stages in the bloodstream."

"How did you cure them?" Jayne said. The grim look on Book and Simon's face gave him the immediate answer.

"There is no cure, " Simon said quietly, "The ships were escorted by Alliance cruisers into space."

"Into space?" Wash asked.

"They were taken there to be incinerated by Alliance gunships" Book finished.

"She's seen it before," River interrupted as the whole crew looked at her.

The young girl walked towards the strawberries, fingering them one by one. "That's why she sealed herself in the airlock. She

Comments
Tuesday, 18 January 2005 12:11
This was very good and I loved it that River was the one to come up with the solution. The only part I did not agree with was Zoe telling the Captain to act like the Captain. Even if she had been thinking it she would not have said it to him, just struck a very wrong note. Everything else thought was perfect! Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 January 2005 15:13
That was gorram perfect. Personally, I would've cut it off at the "There is no life worth having without you." line, thus turning the story into a tragic love story. But otherwise, this is a very well written story. Characterizations, emotions and building suspense were done very well.
Tuesday, 18 January 2005 15:51
Nicely!

The relationships between the characters are all spot on. Thought the turnaround of the chummy exercise sessions was a nice touch.

However, the lifting of a quote from Frank Miller's Batman did not go unnoticed ;)
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 January 2005 19:34
my username was incorrigible or flodwonky. i can't seem 2 keep my browser signed in.

that was very good.

the scene where Zoe gets a little more attitude than usual with Mal was a little off.

most all the characters were bang on.

I really liked River solving the problem, and Book threatening Jayne.

Simon got a little backbone, and actually stood up for his feelings. It's nice to see him have some personality.

thanks for a fun read.
Tuesday, 18 January 2005 19:56
I liked this story! Nicely done. Good job on River for coming up with the solution, and it's about time Simon got a backbone!

- Soul -
Wednesday, 19 January 2005 16:46
I liked the story. It was so sweet to see Simon being so in touch with his feelings and to see River being the hero once again.

Keep writing!! =o)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 27 January 2005 09:58
hey that was a great story and very kool and a happy ending
and i think that it was great that river waa the hero
it was great and totaly keep writing
Wednesday, 19 October 2011 20:48
So gorram shiny!!!! "There is no life worth having without you." awwww Simon<3 I want a continuation though:D

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