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THE REFLECTION SERIES: 28. "Endings and Beginnings"

Wednesday, December 22, 2004

"The folks on Glory are beginning to fret. River executes a cunning plan while Inara and Simon learn there is help closer at hand than they had dreamed."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4155    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "ENDINGS AND BEGINNINGS"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "MIRROR IMAGE"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The folks on Glory are beginning to fret. River executes a cunning plan while Inara and Simon learn there is help closer at hand than they had dreamed."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly' are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"ENDINGS AND BEGINNINGS"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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They were coming up to what was called the Wet Season on Glory. Hal Larkin tried to hide his deepening sense of unease. The weeks were passing and still there had been no word from Rafe. A friend on a neighbouring ranch had a cortex link and he and Molly had gone over to beg the use of it but still no word. No nothing. He should have been relieved not to hear word of the *laoban* being caught or executed for siding with Independent rebels but it just deepened the empty feeling crawling in his gut that something must have gone wrong. He did not say as much to Molly but she was no fool. She was after all her father's daughter.

"He isn't dead, Hal."

The foreman grunted an awkward aknowledgement as if pretending he had been thinking no such thing.

"Besides, Chung-li's with him. If anythin' had gone wrong he would'a got us word, *dui*?"

He nodded. That much at least he could be sure of. Mayhap the girl was right and he was just worrying his old bones for no good reason at all. He thought about the boys, Ben and Mark, up in the high meadow moving the cattle. No word either on the status of the ranch so presumably that eleventh hour reprieve from old man Cyrus was still good. He cut a look to the tall beauty walking besid

Comments
Thursday, 23 December 2004 13:50
Lovely ending - it was an ending, right? Tt felt like an ending. Very sweet, even if I was a bit creeped out by River's dispassionate killing. Good explanation about the poisoning - I was glad there were no traitors on board.

I loved the way it ended with a sense of hope, visions of new and better lives to come and the way that River could see it all. And the way she thought of the freed slaves as a new herd made me smile - reminiscent of her empathy with the beasts in "Safe."

Good work.

Thursday, 23 December 2004 17:00
Wonder what she used for poison. Regardless, it's wrapping-up nicely, but I'm still looking forward to seeing how Zoe comes to grips with her loss of faith in Mal.
Thursday, 23 December 2004 18:52
No, Kispexi2, this is not the end but the penultimate chapter. I always flag the last part 'Series Conclusion' so folks will know. And yes, as you guessed artships there is still a little more to come. Thanks for the comments and Keep Flyin',
Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 24 December 2004 13:45
I love this story. I too am looking forward to how everything wraps up. Great job, Ali!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 December 2004 19:41
Dropping out of 'lurker' mode to say this is your best work so far Ali, I loved it, and am really looking forward to more from you. =)


Dru
Friday, 14 January 2005 07:23
I loved Wash's moment. "My wife does good work," and his doting over her...

Book had a nice line as well...

I too enjoyed the subtle assassin pointed at the Blue Sun. Sounds like River's coming around...

Keep flyin'

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