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THE REFLECTION SERIES: 23. "Sleeping Passions"

Monday, December 6, 2004

"Jaimie Sparks goes back aboard the slaver's ship while Simon tends the Captain and Rafe Connor considers what to do about the ones who never got away."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4217    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "SLEEPING PASSIONS"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing

RATING: PG-13

STATUS: SEQUEL to "DAMAGED GOODS"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Jaimie Sparks goes back aboard the slaver's

ship while Simon tends the Captain and Rafe Connor considers

what to do about the ones who never got away."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"SLEEPING PASSIONS"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

He did not feel exactly nervous, more wired than afraid. His nerves jumping under his skin and making him all kinds of uneasy as if unfriendly eyes were solemnly watching his progress yet *Shi* did not see anyone. Every now and then he would come across the human debris of their firefight, the anxious scramble for freedom carved out through those foolish *tamade hundan* thinking to stop them. Mal and Chung-li had apparently shared a cell, the Captain hanging from a pair of manacles with Chung-li chained to the wall opposite. From what he recalled of River's words the only time he had been attacked was when the Chinaman had broken free to defend Mal. *Shi* swallowed carefully as a lump formed in his throat. So rutting typical of the man. He felt a flush of anger. What the good gorram was a cook doing thinking he could fight? Up to his neck in blood and bullets was no place for him to be.

A small sound made him freeze, ears stretching to try to amplify what he heard into enough detail for recognition but the sound did not repeat and a slither of apprehension crept up his spine stealing the warmth from his body.

* * * * *

Inara was tired but determined to stay awake. Her vigil beside the Captain was little more

Comments
Monday, 06 December 2004 14:10
Whoa Ali! Another heart-breaking corker of a chapter! I love the way you portray River's spooky connection with the Captain - that scene between her and Inara at the start was so sweetly painful. As was the scene between her and Mal.

And poor, poor Tollan. Deeply worried he's going to do something misguided and stupid in his grief. Roll on the next chapter!
Monday, 06 December 2004 17:44
Beautiful as always, Ali! You've reached into the hearts of these characters and into my heart as well. Some stories have a tendency to grow stale after a while, but this one still grips me even after 23 parts.

I'm waitin' for the next installment, and as you say: "I can't wait to see what the gorram happens next!"
Wednesday, 08 December 2004 00:27
You paint all these characters with vibrant colours. Outstanding story, I'm rivetted to it.

I'm confident there's more great work to follow with this tale. Shiny anticipation!
Wednesday, 08 December 2004 21:42
That's right, River. Get after those two, they can only be making eyes at each other for so long...

And Simon, for God's sake, take good care of the captain's face. Burned and beaten, man...

What will they find on the forty-five?

Good stuff, Ali D,

Keep flyin'
Wednesday, 26 October 2011 05:04
The mechanic gave a little smile, watched as Wash slid an arm around his wife's waist. It never ceased to please and amaze Kaylee how easily the two of them fitted together. Like they was made to fit. She hoped her and Simon would be like that some day.
I really, really, *REALLY* love this part, perfectly written!

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