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Branded firefly

Sunday, November 21, 2004

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CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2131    RATING: 2.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Branded firefly

By Nathan .G.

Nathanly .G. Kent

Son of Sara renyols, David Kent

Sister Catherine Anne, twin brother Freddy

Aunt rose banthor uncle sir Robert banthor

Grand parent Kate Malcolm renolye

Service recorded

5’9 brown hair blue green eye age 27

Graduated

Engineer, mathematic, fencing, military strategy karat, space navigation and flight

10 years of service five year of classified development of dragon fly cargo and transport ship, g. r. e .c c. a giant robotic environment combat or construction , armor and suit.

Two year special force honored with sword and the rank of ltienut and special clearers

Assigned to test facility on terra nova outpost

His last posting was in theta sector of the rim sector.

Court marshal charge with cowerd dishonorable discharged.

Class itfied

Dragonfly based on firefly with enhanced armor alloy incensed cargo for two g. r .e .s .c .c .a

The dragon fly four side engines for enter planter flight

The size in length is 300 yard from tip twice the length of the firefly class 75% faster with max range 1000 times greater than the fire fly.

Weapon four short range missile chambers near the cargo hatch one of six guns two on rear side to protect the engine two on the back of the head one under the head above the cargo hatch

One Vulcan canon mounted arm turot on the back

Comments
Sunday, 21 November 2004 04:06
this tale is a work inthe progress any fan can use this carecter with my pormission in right of the story don't publishit with out asking pleas i am poor. but any ideas for iam no author.

help Nathanly kent i need a plot even if he was betraied by his supier officer and stole a classified planes
and mercieaner reapher attak the out post. i need deatial help.
Sunday, 21 November 2004 14:40
No offence but you badly need a Beta reader. I wasn't going to comment as I didn't want to put you off but it is painful trying to read this and there does not appear to be any story just disjointed bits and pieces. It would be helpful to you to actually work out the story and let someone else read it and make any corrections before you post it. Hope the advice helps, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 23 November 2004 17:30
Beta Reader? I think Spellchecker would be a good start.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 25 November 2004 02:23
you are all right but can you take what thier and add to it that what i need because i all iam think is of doing is use the old wester with cuck conner called brannded as a charecter template.

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