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THE REFLECTION SERIES: 19. "Homeward Bound"

Wednesday, November 10, 2004

"The Captain proposes a plan to get his crew off the forty-four but not everyone is happy with the arrangement. Back on board the Crazy Goose time is running out."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4289    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "HOMEWARD BOUND"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing

RATING: PG-13

STATUS: SEQUEL to "IN THE NICK OF TIME"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The Captain proposes a plan to get his crew

off the forty-four but not everyone is happy with the arrangement.

Back on board the Crazy Goose time is running out."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"HOMEWARD BOUND"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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The Captain looked down and his frown deepened. "Badger! I should'a known that *goushi* stench was you."

Badger managed to pull himself up into a sitting position. He seemed to be having trouble breathing but Mal didn't rightly care. If Badger was behind what had happened to his crew as he suspected he was about to feel a whole lot worse. A 'verse of pain would be waiting for him, fair recompense for his betrayal. As his face darkened Chung-li rested a hand on the Captain's shoulder and murmured something in his ear the others could not catch. Mal nodded but did not take his eyes off the treacherous kingpin. He waited until he caught Badger's eye. "Later." He promised, his voice soft but deadly.

The Captain looked away from Badger and glanced round at his crew. "Let's get out of here."

Simon's eyes widened as panic crowded in. "But River..."

"I'll find your sister, now go! Rafe, can I count on you to see to it they get to the runabout? If'n half your men can stay with me we'll go find our missin' girl then retrieve my boat. See you back aboard the Goose."

Rafe made no move to go but watched the Captain drag a reluctant Badger to his feet. Zoe was frowning not at all pleased with the idea of b

Comments
Wednesday, 10 November 2004 16:40
The premise of this whole story - That Mal could be made to abandon Serenity and his crew - Is almost as interesting as the new wrinkle, that Zoe could lose faith in Mal and must now deal with that. Excellent storytelling!
Wednesday, 10 November 2004 18:16
Glad to see the next chapter at last (not that I'm impatient or anything. Nice on Zoe's reactions to Mal's new friends. I loved Wash playing with the high-tech equipment too - very Wash. And found myself nodding at this bit:
"Mal was simply Mal and when folk saw that they responded in kind. They either took to him or left him alone. With Mal there was no middle ground."
Saturday, 13 November 2004 20:46
Loved Wash in this one. Very nice. Now to find out what BAdger's punishment is.
Sunday, 14 November 2004 01:17
"It amazed her how quickly Mal made connections with people, how instantaneous the trust he engendered in strangers... They either took to him or left him alone. With Mal there was no middle ground." Yup. They either ally with him immediately, or try to burn him alive. Really, really no middle ground! ;-)

I agree with Zoe--felt all kinds of wrong that she left Mal.

Loved Wash with the pretty ship.
Tuesday, 25 October 2011 22:45
The pilot gazed up at his wife in complete adoration. A puppy dog look coming into his eyes that seldom failed to move her. "Can I have one, Zoe? If I'm really good, eat all my protein cubes and promise to be extra appealin'?"
LOL!!! you do a great job of writing Wash!! I love his and Kaylees reaction to the shiny ship;D


Hal shrugged and brushed his horse down, the familiar routine calming him and bringing an odd kind of peace.
VERY Well written! That's exactly how it feelsXD

I love how you've written all the Wash/Zoe, and all the hints of Simon/Kaylee, and Mal/Inara, very well done! :D

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