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THE DEVIL'S CRADLE: 56. "Tangles"

Friday, November 8, 2013

He leaned back in his chair and affected another smile, the kind no doubt those ancient creatures on Earth-that-was extended to their prey moments before their jaws clamped down and crushed in their skulls.

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TITLE: "TANGLES"

SERIES: THE DEVIL'S CRADLE

CHAPTER: 56. Sequel to "TWISTED"

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

PAIRING: Zoe/Wash Kaylee/Simon Mal/Inara

RATING: PG-13

SUMMARY: "The Minister worries that he has put

a friend in danger. The Captain starts the task of

assessing the state of those still alive on the freighter

not necessarily helped by Badger. Ryan discovers that

surviving the explosion does not mean that he is safe."

"TANGLES"

A "Firefly" Story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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The summons was unexpected and beyond inconvenient. More than that it was troubling. It was the last thing he wanted to submit to but the source could not be denied or his place within that depressing but very lucrative hierarchy. Provided you played by the rules and by and large he had done just that. Minister Heyerdahl had no reason to reproach himself yet it was incumbent upon his survival instincts to do just that. The Over Sight Committee seemed to have a particular interest in his recent actions and that roused other even less pleasant suspicions. The Minister pushed those thoughts to the back of his mind as he arrived at the nondescript building on Osiris.

As he approached the outer doors he was scanned from head to foot. He then pressed the thumb of his right hand over the fingerprint reader and leaned close to the retinal scanner. Seconds later the door opened and he stepped inside. The interior could not be a bigger contrast to the mundane outside of the building. Clean, efficient lines with durable but artistically fashioned supporting pillars and beams giving an impression of space and freedom to a building that guaranteed neither. He was met by the current Chair of the Committee, Ivan Rostov. The Chair circulated on a random basis and those elected to fulfill that function were chosen at a much higher level of power.

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Comments
Friday, 08 November 2013 08:02
Ah the River/Mal talk in riddles and metaphors that no one but them understand but they seem to understand just fine. Almost like the silent communication between Zoe and Mal.
Saturday, 09 November 2013 00:19
I always liked the connection between Mal and River, Nutluck. Her being a mind reading genius helps. And Mal and Zoe are like two peas in a pod, both on the same shiny wavelength. Thanks for the cool feedback, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
MALSDOXY
Saturday, 09 November 2013 07:38
see here's the thing about your fics, AliD...I can ALWAYS picture everything perfectly in my mind's eye, everything. That's why they're so very entertaining and captivating, cuz they leave you with the wantin' more...um, on that note...MORE PLEASE TYVM Have a nice day ;}
Saturday, 09 November 2013 23:16
Hello, Malsdoxy, how good to know that you can picture everything perfectly in your mind's eye, I could not ask for a better compliment. That and the writing faster. *Xie xie ni* for the shiny comments, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Saturday, 23 November 2013 06:13
Oh, I see layers on layers here, as Inara's Minister with the gift-engine-with-built-in-spy-feature confronts Rostov, who is creepifying in his own way, too. I liked Kaylee and Wash's little staged conversation, as they work their trick around the spying shiny new engine. And the spare shuttle is EMPTY??? Oh no! It was satisfying to see Wilkinson get knocked on the head, but I think what I liked best was Mal and River and Zoe working together to come up with a way out of their tight spot. Also cool to see Book revealing yet another unexpected skill from his past -- "You fly many freighters for Southdown Abbey?" -- that line made me smile.
Saturday, 30 November 2013 19:33
Hello ebfiddler, glad you are enjoying the layers and sorry to take a while to respond but I have not been able to log on and Haken has now fixed the problem, for which I am truly grateful. Yes, lots happening and soon you will discover what happened to Jerrod and his crew as well as how the rest of the story is set to play out. And Book does keep surprising us doesn't he? Thanks for the shiny comments, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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