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THE DEVIL'S CRADLE: 45. "Dark Forces"

Wednesday, May 22, 2013

As he turned and headed off towards the docks to find transport off world a shadow shifted in the darkness behind him.

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TITLE: "DARK FORCES"

SERIES: THE DEVIL'S CRADLE

CHAPTER: 45. Sequel to "SCUM OF THE 'VERSE"

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

PAIRING: Zoe/Wash Kaylee/Simon Mal/Inara

RATING: PG-13

SUMMARY: "Ryan has a lucky escape. Badger looks

for help but finds something much worse. Meanwhile

the crew of Serenity have troubles of their own."

"DARK FORCES"

A "Firefly" Story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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"What the *diyu* happened?"

Ryan moved carefully but it still hurt. Even his gorram bruises had bruises and he was pretty sure he had at least a couple of cracked ribs. "It was those psycho guards." He drew in a quick pained breath. Even talking hurt. Elliot gave his friend a worried look but Ryan shook off the unspoken question. They didn't have time for this. "Help me, Elly."

A quick glance then Elliot was moving low to grip his friend. He hissed a quick warning then dragged him out into the ice bound yard where everyone had been forced to gather as soon as the alarm went off. Their only safety was in numbers. They could not see the guards but knew better than to assume they were unobserved. Crafty, spiteful *hundan* were probably watching and laughing. What concerned Elliot Carr more was why the guards had decided to make Ryan their personal punch bag.

"Told ya not to make trouble." He hissed.

"*Bushi wode cuo*, Wilko's been itchin' to have a go at me. This time he brought friends."

"Yeah but *weishenme* an' why now?"

Ryan McFarlane knew, it was that gorram dust but telling Elliot might paint a target on his back too and one of them up to their eyes in *shen goushi* was one too many.

"If they got it in for ya," said Elliot quietly as he gently checked his wounds "they could try anythin' next."

"You're a real comf

Comments
BYTEMITE
Wednesday, 22 May 2013 16:57
Huh. I guess someone is still hunting for the kids besides Jerrod. Unless it's someone after Mal in particular.
Wednesday, 22 May 2013 23:26
You will have to wait and see Bytemite. Thanks for the welcome feedback, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
EBFIDDLER
Thursday, 23 May 2013 04:20
Exciting chapter! Action's heating up, Jerrod has started his plan although I still don't know why, and Mal is already suspicious. Can't wait to see what's in store.
Thursday, 23 May 2013 04:59
Seems everyone is in deep trouble now. Though I have my doubts the sermons where "just" sermons, Book is deep and mysteries.
MALSDOXY
Friday, 24 May 2013 02:56
so they're being shadowed by who, an Operative? no, wait, that's not right...WHO IS IT?? Argh, such a tangled web you weave, AliD, so intriguing, xie xie
PS Bet River does something spectacular soon, I'm thinkin'
Friday, 24 May 2013 11:39
Glad you are enjoying the building action, Ebfiddler. You will find out in the next few chapters just what is driving Jerrod. You are right, Nutluck, Book is deep and mysterious, so many layers to him. As for who is shadowing them, Malsdoxy, it will all come together in a few. So happy you are enjoying the tangled web and thank you everyone for the shiny feedback! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Friday, 24 May 2013 11:40
Glad you are enjoying the building action, Ebfiddler. You will find out in the next few chapters just what is driving Jerrod. You are right, Nutluck, Book is deep and mysterious, so many layers to him. As for who is shadowing them, Malsdoxy, it will all come together in a few. So happy you are enjoying the tangled web and thank you everyone for the shiny feedback! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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