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THE DEVIL'S CRADLE: The Fiery Pit

Saturday, April 27, 2013

Folk broke into places to steal things of value but to set people alight, to torch a place? He tip toed through the ashes and ruin of his former place of power, eyes flicking nervously right and left as if he expected one of the charred bodies to sit up and speak to him.

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TITLE: "THE FIEREY PIT"

SERIES: THE DEVIL'S CAULDRON

CHAPTER: 43. Sequel to "THE GORRAM PLAN"

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

PAIRING: Zoe/Wash Kaylee/Simon Mal/Inara

SUMMARY: "Ryan McFarlane runs into trouble on

Titan Station, meanwhile Badger is gettng more and

more panicked. Mal's plan begins to take shape but

Monty is far from happy about it."

"THE FIERY PIT"

A "Firefly" Story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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He hated this but it was not as if he could complain. Folk who stepped out of line had a habit of disappearing very quickly, never to be seen again. He had heard rumours. Nasty, eerie, creepifying rumours about what happened to anyone creating even the hint of a stir. If they had been taken away and quietly executed it would have kinder than what was their rumoured fate. Test subjects in some mind bending and truly horrific experiments. Ryan McFarlane did not want to find out first hand what had happened to them.

The furnace was a shock the first time you saw it. Here, in the middle of this frozen wasteland at the ass-end of the gorram 'verse, in the last place you would expect to see something like this Yet this was not natural, far from it. There was no volcanic activity on Titan Station so how had they managed to create the angry, heat ravaged maw of the depths of *diyu* and then build a rutting prison complex around it?

A glare from a guard had him moving more quickly, his heartbeat hammering at the clumsy slip. He could not afford to wool gather, had to keep his gorram wits about him. The line moved up, shovels in hand. One by one they carefully scooped up the dust and added it to the cauldron hanging over the fiery pit. For a moment, just a fraction of a second, Ryan thought something had glittered and stirred in the dust as he tipped his shovel. He blinked. Nothing. What the *guai* was the matter with him?

Comments
MALSDOXY
Sunday, 28 April 2013 16:51
fiery pit activates the dust? the kids know where Titan Station is? Book, he knows something...geez, lots going on, eagerly awaiting next chapter, AliD, xie xie :D
Sunday, 28 April 2013 20:56
Yeah I think Badger isn't going to like the results if he decides to play with the lady.
Sunday, 28 April 2013 22:41
The fiery pit causes the nanotech added to the dust to activate which changes it into the weapon material, Malsdoxy. The children know all manner of things and Book has his part to play too. So happy you are enjoying the story. And yes, Nutluck, Badger would be the King of Idiots to mess with the Lady but then at times he really isn't very bright. Thank you both for the shiny comments, Ali D :-)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
BYTEMITE
Sunday, 28 April 2013 23:01
> The big man's face broke out into a big happy grin, pleasure lighting up his eyes like the 4th of July on Earth-That-Was. "*Dang ran* but I'll need some supplies dependin' on how big ya want it."

Perfect Jayne, scary prison, and something tells me Badger's plan is going to go better than the crew.
Monday, 29 April 2013 20:02
Badger's plan going better than our Big Damn Heroes plan, Bytemite? Now that IS gorram scary! Thank goodness for Jayne is all I can say. Thanks for the shiny feedback, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Wednesday, 01 May 2013 03:46
Jayne gets to blow something up. That will make him happy. Something is sure to go wrong with the Captain's plan, because it's Mal we're talking about! ;-) I think Badger has bit off more than he can chew. Your description of the prison and its fiery pit and all the security measures -- very good. Another good chapter.
Wednesday, 01 May 2013 21:18
Yes, Ebfiddler, Jayne will be in his element. As for Badger he really has bitten off more than he can chew. Glad you are enjoying the story and thank you for the shiny feedback, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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