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The Valley

Monday, October 18, 2004

Serenity is once again stuck for money (big surprise), and Inara is definitely leaving. These are just a couple of the problems keeping Mal awake at night. Yet, when a solution to his cash crunch, and Inara’s imminent departure lands in his lap, Mal must decide if it’s worth going head to head with his past.

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THE VALLEY

(Fan fiction based upon the characters in the television series “Firefly”)

It sounded like a pretty straightforward job. At least that’s what Mal told himself. As captain of Serenity, Mal Reynolds was the one who was supposed to get the call when you wanted to hire his ship or his crew. Not that he would necessarily turn away work that came through another door. Necessity and experience made Mal a practical man. And since the gorram Alliance had recently doubled, and in some sectors tripled, their patrols, his practical side made him willing to listen to almost any proposal. Decent smuggling jobs were getting tough to find. There was always thieving, but lately that seemed to bring an overabundance of shooting. Even with their newly acquired doctor, Simon Tam, around to mend em properly, Mal had decided to avoid jobs where it looked like a lot of gunplay was inevitable. Unfortunately, times being what they were, Mal’s newfound cautiousness left them with little to no work and a quickly diminishing fuel and food supply. The job they were heading towards was supposed to change all that. In fact, from what Mal had heard so far it might even be legal. Of course, the facts were a bit sketchy, and there was that one potentially serious flaw. The job came by way of Jayne.

It was the “Jayne” issue that made it impossible for Mal to sleep. While the others took to their beds, Mal wandered his ship from bridge to hold, thinking. Perhaps, he was being unfair. Not all of Jayne’s ideas lacked sanity. In fact, from time to time, Jayne could be pretty cunning. On the other hand, the last time Jayne cut his own deal, he damn near brought the Feds down on all of them. Mal’s instincts told him that any job brought to the table by Jayne was probably screwed up from the get go. Unfortunately, they needed money, yesterday, and to get that they needed work.

On the positive side, the trip to meet Jayne’s client gave them a legitimate reason to steer clear of the central plane

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 18 October 2004 06:26
Very enjoyable story. I'd love to see more of it.
MAI
Monday, 18 October 2004 06:58
Great start. Hope there's more to come soon.
Monday, 18 October 2004 17:59
Good myth, glad as *diyu* that Atherton got what he deserved. I like it that Inara and Mal have both admitted to themselves how much the other means to them even if the words aren't there yet. Can't wait for the next part. Somehow I don't think Inara will be getting off and staying on Sihnon... Shiny. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 21 October 2004 01:06
I really liked your depiction of how seismically unstable Hera is due to the pounding it took. Adds an element of imagery to what the battle there could have been like.

Interesting and well thoughtout story line all the way around.

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