Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
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BYTEMITE
Sunday, 27 January 2013 02:48
Ack! That formatting! Something has gone wrong.
Comeuppance for the Operative though. Nice. And in just the way I like to see it happen.
And it's a clever plan for Serenity. But a big concern about the grey goo that could eat through the soil over their heads and their ship too.
Comeuppance for the Operative though. Nice. And in just the way I like to see it happen.
And it's a clever plan for Serenity. But a big concern about the grey goo that could eat through the soil over their heads and their ship too.
Sunday, 27 January 2013 06:09
Bytemite, I have removed this double post and corrected the formatting on the one before which now becomes the proper entry. Yes, it is nice to see the Operative out manoeuvred. As for the Big Damn Plan, Mal has always been most inventive when he's got next to nothing to work with. Thank you for the shiny feedback, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
"You can't take the sky from me!"
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