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THE DEVIL'S CRADLE: 29. "Grey Ghosts"

Thursday, December 20, 2012

There was nothing else of interest or consequence in what was left of the Hunter's head. The rest of his body had already been disposed of. Four pairs of eyes looked on from their own observation room.

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TITLE: "GREY GHOSTS"

SERIES: THE DEVIL'S CRADLE

CHAPTER: 29. Sequel to "INSTINCT"

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

PAIRING: Zoe/Wash Kaylee/Simon Mal/Inara

RATING: PG-13

SUMMARY: "Suzie and Davie find themselves in a race

against time on Osiris. Mal convinces Jerrod Perkins that

it is time for them to leave Anaeron only to find nothing is

quite that simple."

"GREY GHOSTS"

A "Firefly" Story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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It was more than confusing watching all the comings and goings but Suzie did not dare to drop her guard. They needed to get off the huge transport ship before anyone noticed them. Davie was getting not only restless but more and more anxious and she was afraid if they did not make their move soon he would do something that would draw attention to them.

'I am not stupid, *dong ma*?'

'*Wo zhidao* it's just that this is dangerous, we cannot be too careful.'

Just then Suzie saw the opening she had been waiting for and with a quick nudge to Davie to stay close she darted out from behind the storage crates. Whether by luck or shrewd judgement they managed to mingle with the press of people milling around the docks and disembarking. Suzie dd ot dare to relax but kept Davie on the move, tagging on to families when they seemed to be going in the direction she wanted then breaking off seamlessly to tag on to another group when they turned off. As they threaded their way through the busy dock foot traffic began to dwindle and Suzie had them peel off and leave before they got close to any port officials. Only when they were safely away from the immediate area did she allow them to take a short rest. The ara of greenery was not much, a bit of overlooked shrubbery and thorny bushes that had once been open ground before the concrete jungle of the docking area took over. The occasional stunted tree made t all look rat

Comments
BYTEMITE
Friday, 21 December 2012 20:16
Can't go up, can't go down... Hmm. The only thing I can think of where the crew might have an advantage is that Mal might be immune to this stuff. But I can't think how they could use that to their advantage, and I'm also not sure they want to find out for sure that Mal can take it.
Saturday, 22 December 2012 15:05
Of course they can go down, has no one in Serenity seen Journey to the Center of the Earth? sheesh.
Thursday, 27 December 2012 16:01
There's something with the going down option. At least the commander wants to interrogate them before dispersing his kills-and-destroys-all agent. I'm wondering what the Operative is up to, and why he's working with those mind-destroying faceless entities, regarding the Hunter. Also, what's up with all the kids? Many layers here, Ali. I'm wondering how they will all get out of this pickle, and I'm guessing that there will some kind of immunity-equivalent process that will work to their advantage. Poor River, it's hard to be put in the the position of Cassandra.
Saturday, 29 December 2012 00:48
Hello Bytemite, they do seem to be stuck between a rock and a hard place. As for Mal's immunity nothing is quite that straightforward. You made me laugh Nutluck with your Journey to the Center of the Earth comment, at least they would be warm. Yes, there are many layers Ebfiddler but things will start to become clearer soon. As for River, she isn't really Cassandra so that has to be a plus for her, right? Thank you everyone for the shiny feedback. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and that the New Year brings all sorts of magic into your lives. Ali D :-)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 10 March 2013 01:44
Her voice had gone deadly quiet, the kind of hush of a graveyard multiplied by every body in it.
I so love the way you write, AliD xie xie and Happy new year

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