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THE DEVIL'S CRADLE: 21. "Double Bluff"

Saturday, September 15, 2012

As each body chamber was closed, the click and hydraulic hiss sent a shudder through him.

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TITLE: "DOUBLE BLUFF"

SERIES: THE DEVIL'S CRADLE

CHAPTER: 21. Sequel to "MIGHT AIN'T RIGHT"

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

PAIRING: Zoe/Wash Kaylee/Simon Mal/Inara

RATING: PG-13

SUMMARY: "Commandant Urquart leaves Serenity

not realising he has been fooled on two accounts. While

Captain and crew seek to stay out of Alliance hands they

piece together a disturbing possibility. Meanwhile, Lucy

seeks to hide from Silas while the Hunter plans a surprise

for those looking for him."

"DOUBLE BLUFF"

A "Firefly" Story

Writtenby Alison M. DOBELL

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Kaylee shuddered. "He gave me the creeps, *dong ma*? Cold eyes."

"He's Alliance." Growled Jayne as if that explained everything.

None of them could quite get over the fact that the purplebellies had actually left. For a heart stopping moment it had looked as if the Commandant was going to drag Serenity's Captain off the ship under the guise of getting him 'medical treatment'. No one was fooled into thinking there was anything kindly or philanthropic about the so-called offer. Now they were standing around in the commons area kind of stunned as if waiting for the other shoe to drop. Kaylee narrowed her eyes, still thinking about that gorram Commandant Urquart.

"I don't trust him."

Jayne snorted. "Yeah, 'cause he's Alliance."

Kaylee ignored the mercenary and stared at Shepherd Book. The Preacher had helped the Captain to sit down at the table and was hovering while trying not to look like he was doing so. The Captain didn't take kindly to folk fussing over him except when the pain was so bad he didn't notice. The fact that he was so quiet was making them a mite jumpy. A minute or so later Zoe joined them, a dark frown on her face. Inara had been keeping one eye on the Captain but

Comments
BYTEMITE
Saturday, 15 September 2012 20:45
It's never easy for the captain.

I think Lucy's hunter is close too. And the traids... Still don't know what they're after. Still building dramatic tension I see.
Saturday, 15 September 2012 23:20
You said it, Bytemite. The Captain carries the responsibility as well as the worry. As for building dramatic tension, there's more to come. Thanks for the shiny feedback, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 16 September 2012 14:32
Somehow I don't think Mal would have liked it if Zoe brought the curly carrots to Wash on the bridge.
Sunday, 16 September 2012 16:17
Who knows Nutluck, maybe Wash would have shared? LOL. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 16 September 2012 18:33
That gorram Mal!! So stubborn!! this is REALLY getting interesting, AliD, thanks for putting this one up so fast..um, next one, please? ;)) [reaches over to fasten seat belt, fear a bumpy ride coming]
Sunday, 16 September 2012 19:24
Yep, our Captain is a very stubborn man, MalsDoxy. Glad you are buckling in for what is to come! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Saturday, 22 September 2012 05:43
Very good chapter, Ali D! Loved the line about Mal's mama telling him it was the sugary content that rotted your teeth. It appears there are wheels within wheels here, with the General and the Commandant and the various groups of Triads. Just what are they all up to on Anaeron? Personally, I would give that place a wide berth. It seems the Captain is every bit as bad off as he was pretending to be for the Commandant.
Saturday, 22 September 2012 14:11
You are right Ebfiddler, definitely wheels within wheels. You will find out more soon and also why the Captain has had a setback. Thank you for the shiny feedback, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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