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THE NINE HELLS SERIES: 3. "What Was Lost"

Saturday, July 26, 2003

"River tries to help the Captain but just succeeds in confusing him. Inara takes on a new client and the crew of Serenity have the offer of a lucrative job."

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TITLE: "WHAT WAS LOST"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "RECOVERY".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "River tries to help the Captain but just

succeeds in confusing him. Inara takes on a new client

and the crew of Serenity have the offer of a lucrative job."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and "Firefly"

are the gift and property of Joss Whedon. No infringement

of copyright is intended.

"WHAT WAS LOST"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

They were going to Boros. Inara had business there and Mal had heard of a job going. Details were sketchy but then the whole 'verse was like a patchy line drawing not fully inked in. Some bits had pretty much no colour. Others blazed with it like the neon lights of some casino seducing the unwary to part with their money on the rigged tables for the illusive promise of sating their greed. Easy money. Or so they thought. Huh. It was early. He was first to rise. Probably because he slept in snatches. Couldn't remember the last time he had gone right through the night unless you counted the four days Simon had drugged him. He was still more than a little vexed about that though another part of him acknowledged the boy had saved his life. It had been his longest period of sleep in years. Least. Since the war. The war. *Wu de ma*. Why couldn't he leave that cross behind him? Was he destined to spend eternity with the gorram thing strapped to his back? He poured himself a coffee. It was hot, black and bitter but it sharpened the senses dulled by weariness. His wound had pretty much healed. Hardly hurt at all unless he moved too quickly from a moment of stillness.

He took his seat at the empty table and thought about Inara. Hated that she whored herself

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 27 July 2003 00:36
BC

I liked it. River certainly seems to know the Captain.
Sunday, 27 July 2003 02:45
Your style of writing is great - it's captivating and interesting without bogging us down with petty details. I love how you're getting to the group dynamic's, especially from Mal's point of view. He acts like a father figure to everyone, but he's not that old himself, and in many ways could use an older, influential male figure in his own life. It's an interesting place to go in terms of character and plot development to see the reasoning behind his actions and relationships, even if he stops himself from delving too deep - we all get to speculate some more on them.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 27 July 2003 12:29
Loved the part with Mal and River at the beginning. Yours is one of the best fanfics I´ve read so far, with some great one-liners. Keep em coming!
Sunday, 27 July 2003 18:14
That was truely great.

Your description of the meal made me hungry for a little Vietnamese place I like.

I also really liked your discription of the various philosophys our good shepard has studied.

Hope to read the next part soon...

Thanks
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 28 July 2003 18:26
Just gotta say i am loving it. Please keep it coming
Thursday, 31 July 2003 00:58
I LOVE this! You occasionally change pov. Keep writing!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 06 August 2003 08:08
Thank you. I loved it!
Gate74
Thursday, 13 October 2011 19:03
Loved it!!! The best part was the part with the erhu, so beautifully written... Really captured how music can just take you back... Aaa the whole thing was so shiny!!!!:D
Thursday, 13 October 2011 19:04
Loved it!!! The best part was the part with the erhu, so beautifully written... Really captured how music can just take you back... Aaa the whole thing was so shiny!!!!:D

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