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THE DEVIL'S CRADLE: 4. "Things Unspoken"

Friday, April 20, 2012

Though her eyes were closed it was as if every nerve ending knew that an even greater danger had arrived. Greater than what? Frantically she tried to remember.

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TITLE: "THINGS UNSPOKEN"

SERIES: THE DEVIL'S CRADLE

CHAPTER: 4. Sequel to "STRONGER THAN STEEL"

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

AUTHOR: Alison M, DOBELL

PAIING: Zoe/Wash Kaylee/Simon

RATING: R

SUMMARY: "Kathleen passes from one hell to another.

Meanwhile, Serenity gets re-fueled and Zoe discovers a

caveat and addendum not mentioned by the Captain. On

Anaeron there is still a cargo needs delivering."

"THINGS UNSPOKEN"

A "Firefly" Story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

'Soon you will go free,little one'

The monster coos, her mind shuddering in mental aftershocks that she has no control over. He lingers as if to savour his handiwork. Knows she does not believe him but that is of little consequence.

'This may hurt but you will feel better soon'

What the *diyu* does he mean by that? Then the pain hits and it robs her of everything except sensation. The one thing she would block if she could he leaves intact. Twisted perverted *chusheng xai-jiao de xiang huo*. He does not commune with her again, too busy wiping out all trace of his interference. Her mind a shiny new thing that reflects nightmares while appearing so clean, so innocent. As he works he hums quietly and the action steadies him in a way that normal conversation or interaction cannot. Her name was Kathleen but he gave her another and though she will answer to her given name he can control her with the other. It is neat, precise, and such a simple solution that he revels in its' elegance. Yes, she can go free but only for as far as the tether allows.

* * * * *

Wash shook his head. Partly amused and partly annoyed that their courageous but *shenjingbing* Captain had not told them his plan in full. Even his stern but loyal wife looked less than happy though of course she was not about to say so. Sometimes he wondered what it would take to sh

Comments
Friday, 20 April 2012 20:04
Hmm is that a second villain to show up? The Wash/Zoe scene was very fitting.
Friday, 20 April 2012 21:58
That would be telling, Nutluck. Glad you liked the Wash/Zoe scene and thanks for the feedback. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Saturday, 21 April 2012 03:20
Who is that gorram woman? Do we know her? Someone Mal pissed off lately? ARGH!! questions upon question, you really know how to snare us, AliD...eagerly awaiting the next chapter
Saturday, 21 April 2012 04:24
Who is that gorram woman? Do we know her? Someone Mal pissed off lately? ARGH!! questions upon question, you really know how to snare us, AliD...eagerly awaiting the next chapter
Saturday, 21 April 2012 09:45
You will have to wait and see, MalsDoxy, but thanks for saying it twice! Lots more to come, think you are confused now? Ooooh, you have no idea.... LOL. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Saturday, 21 April 2012 14:09
um, yeah, sorry about that, cat walking across keyboard sent again...keep flyin'
EBFIDDLER
Tuesday, 24 April 2012 03:57
Love the Wash and Zoe scene!
Tuesday, 24 April 2012 12:02
Thanks, Ebfiddler, and I did laugh about the cat Malsdoxy. They have a tendancy to do that. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
EBFIDDLER
Thursday, 26 April 2012 20:33
Wanted to get back to this to add, I also really like Mal's dealings with Perkins -- particularly Jayne's line, wondering if it was a yes or a no. As usual, you've got some interesting twists!
Thursday, 26 April 2012 22:14
Thanks for the added comment, Ebfiddler. It is appreciated, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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