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HANDFUL OF STARS: 36. "A Handful of Stars"

Sunday, July 10, 2011

"Things get pretty bleak for Mal and Zoe but Serenity's crew are determined to find a way to get them back. Meanwhile similar thoughts occupy Nelson and his men, none of them realising that a random factor is at play."

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TITLE: "A HANDFUL OF STARS"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Kaylee/Simon. Mal/Inara.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "MEMORY LANE".

SUMMARY: "Things get pretty bleak for Mal and Zoe but

Serenity's crew are determined to find a way to get them back.

Meanwhile similar thoughts occupy Nelson and his men, none

of them realising that a random factor is at play."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"A HANDFUL OF STARS"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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"I still don't understand how they found us."

Nelson sucked on his bottom lip, deep in thought. Mulling over all the possibilities, which were painfully few. Nothing made sense unless... No. That couldn't be right. If the Alliance had known about their bolt hole all along they would have been rounded up and incarcerated long ago. That reasoning should have reassured him but it didn't. Until he could work out exactly what had happened - and why - he could not relax or let down his defences. Even among his own.

Donnie Banks watched Nelson closely but held his peace. Knew the kind of thoughts that would be driving the man to distraction. Slowly he looked around and mentally reviewed the few facts they had, trying every which way to put all the pieces together. All they could be certain of was that whoever had attacked their hideout had a very specific agenda. Not one of their men was injured beyond a bit of bruising. It had been a quick surgical strike. The black clad figures had swarmed into the hideout and taken out Serenity's Captain and first mate then left as quickly and efficiently as they had come. Simple as that. Only it wasn't that simple. No one was supposed to know about their hideout. His focus turned back to his *laoban* as Portree Nelson got to his feet. Every eye now on him.

"

Comments
Sunday, 10 July 2011 15:38
building anticipation and mystery...you do it better than anyone else, AliD...thank you for another great chapter
Sunday, 10 July 2011 15:57
Thanks, MalsDoxy. It helps to have such good material to work with and we all need our Firefly fix. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 10 July 2011 16:11
Wow, good chapter. I haven't read the whole series here (came in when you were already well along in this series and haven't managed to catch up) but I started reading this chapter and couldn't stop. You sure know how to build the tension!
Sunday, 10 July 2011 21:38
Very cool, looking forward to the next part.
Sunday, 10 July 2011 21:54
Thank you for the kind comments ebfiddler, I am enjoying your series as well. I hope to have the next part up in a few days time Nutluck so hopefully you won't have to wait long. Feedback is always appreciated. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Monday, 11 July 2011 17:57
Mal just can't get a break.

Mathias as a psychic, now that's scary. I'm getting an almost "The Fish Job" vibe from this torture - that kind of psychological mind screw can be very effective in writing.

And them wanting revenge for Mal getting in the way of finding River... Chilling.
Monday, 11 July 2011 22:34
Poor Mal does get more than his fair share of painful fixes, Bytemite, but thankfully he has a loyal crew who won't stop until they find a way to rescue him. Thanks for the shiny comments, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Wednesday, 13 July 2011 18:53
Yay!

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