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The Four Winds, Chapter 2

Thursday, May 12, 2011

In which Mal argues with Inara, Zoe argues with Wash, and Simon is made intensely uncomfortable.

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Mal was just a bit worked up when he came around the sliding panel that was the door to River's room, just down the corridor from the med bay. Seemed like everything having to do with Inara had the potential to get him worked up one way or another, and he never could sort it out properly, either. "I specifically said nobody leaves the ship!" he accused, zeroing in on Inara without preamble.

Inara and Kaylee turned in surprise to look at him. "Shhhh!" Kaylee admonished, gesturing at the sleeping River in her bunk, and Inara whispered "Lower your voice!"

Mal rolled his eyes. "Zoe says you got a client on Nassau Point," he said, taking care to speak more quietly.

Inara sighed. "Yes, Mal, I have a client who happens to be at Nassau Point right now," she acknowledged, taking him by the elbow and pushing him out into the corridor. "And yes, I have arranged to see him while we're docked there."

"Well, he must not be much to think on, 'cause that is gonna be one quick visit," Mal said, unable to resist the dig, and hating himself for it at the same time. Hating himself for the black look in Inara's captivating eyes, because he knew he deserved it.

"Mal," Inara said, as though explaining matters to a thickheaded child, "this is not a pleasure cruise for me. The arrangement was that I would be able to conduct my business using this ship as a base of operations. But at our last two stops, you've pulled that 'nobody leaves the ship' go seh, and frankly, I'm tired of it. If I cannot conduct my business from Serenity, you'll force me to go elsewhere."

"Do you know what Nassau Point is?" Mal demanded.

Inara rolled her eyes at him. "Jerrode Eusabian has been my client since I was on Sihnon, and he has always kept a suite on Nassau Point," she said levelly. "I have, in fact, been there. Many times."

"Yeah, but you ain't been there with me," he said, desperate to convey the seriousness of the situation. "We didn't pick this rendezvous. Someb

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Thursday, 12 May 2011 20:09
Already I can't help thinking of Nassau Point as a heaving den of iniquity and our poor crew stepping where even angels fear to tread. All the dialogue was brilliant though really, Inara should have told the Captain she had a client there. One more bit of tension and worry to add to the growing pile, methinks. Can't wait for more! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Thursday, 12 May 2011 22:29
Things are certainly heating up, good read, although I can't imagine Inara ever giving Mal this much info about her client, so that didn't ring very true for me, especially in the context of their relationship, post BDM and 3 years later.

Looking cautiously for more.
Friday, 13 May 2011 07:04
Hmm...getting the feeling the title of this storyline is a lot more literal than one might think right off the bat. The BDHs are splitting into four pairs...four directions of the wind...yeah, heavy foreshadowing here ;D

Gotta wonder just how Inara and her client fit into things, because it seems like Inara's back to her old position as a travelling rep for the Guild...but that seems off to me in a post-BDM 'Verse, since whatever lead her to the Training House involved issues with being an active Companion conflicting with being on Serenity or being around Mal. Maybe Inara's trying to work something to the ship's advantage?
Friday, 13 May 2011 09:36
Very nice just went back and reread what you wrote before. Look forward to more, longer chapters. :)
Friday, 13 May 2011 13:06
Everybody always complains that my chapters are too short! It must be my besetting sin.

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