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THE NINE HELLS SERIES: 2. "Recovery"

Wednesday, July 23, 2003

Captain Reynolds recovers with a little help from his friends. Just as things are looking shiny again the past is about to come back with mixed blessings for them all.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 6050    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "RECOVERY"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "INDEPENDENCE"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Captain Reynolds recovers with a little help

from his friends. Just as things are looking shiny again

the past comes back with mixed blessings for them all."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"RECOVERY"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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It was days. Simon kept the Captain sedated. Resisting any requests from the others to let him wake. Determined that for once he was going to have time to heal. Even if he had to force it on him. In the end they bowed to his expertise. River knew what he was doing and why. She watched the others drift in at odd times then leave when there was no sign of him waking. As the days rolled into each other a pattern formed that they accepted. Life began to increase in volume around them. Hearts lightened because every day the Captain hung on was another rung up the ladder to recovery. But River knew different. They only saw the outside. What they were supposed to see. The reassurances they looked for and accepted without question. But inside the facade was crumbling. Fighting battles they could not see. Cut off from anyone who could help him. The creeping nightmares winning inch by inch. Simon was wrong. Enforced sleep was not the answer. It merely prolonged the nightmares.

"River, why don't you go and get something to eat? You've been sitting there for hours."

She shook her head. Expression sombre. Fretful eyes downward looking. "Can't find his way through the drugs." She knew all about drugs.

His head jerked up. A puppet whose

Comments
Wednesday, 23 July 2003 22:05
I loved it! I love anything dark and thought provoking. Too often in fanfic, people see a happy ending without much struggle beforehand, and it's the journey from a messed-up scenerio to a peaceful calm that interests me the most as a reader.
My favorite part is the interaction between Mal and River (in the first part), even if it is only in River's head. Their relationship is oftentimes overlooked in favor of other, romantic ones and I find that a shame. Not too many people like to analyze just why Mal would be willing to take her on board and how her prescence and abilities will affect the dynamic of the ship.
I also like Wash's role as the person who first begins to worry about Mal. It seems fitting that someone who spends so much time worrying about him (and his relationship to Zoe) would be the first to notice something in his demeanor. However, I'd like to see a little more from Mal's perspective, at least in relation to how he sees everyone now as opposed to his past...does he relate the people on Serenity to ghosts in his past? Does he look into the future and wonder what will become of his crew, where they will end up? Don't leave us in anticipation.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 24 July 2003 11:45
Heya,
Great fic. Deep. Dark. I'm assuming there will be a sequel to this. I'll keep an eye out for it. This is shaping up to be fascinating.
S.
Thursday, 24 July 2003 16:04
again very good. same as part one. I loved River in part one and now I loved Wash in part two. Simon sees what's wrong with the body but River and now Wash see whats's wrong with the mind or soul. and they all are atuned to their captain. they watch out for him, as he watches out for them. he needs people watching out for him because he never bothers to do it himself.

Idefix
Tuesday, 29 July 2003 22:58
Excellent job. I agree with you that Mal just about has to be suffereing from post traumatic stress syndrome. Loved the part where River can tell what Simon cannot about how he is falling into the abyss by being kept under sedation.
Thursday, 13 October 2011 17:26
Just the right balance of light (the part with Mal, Zoe, and Wash on the bridge) and dark (everything else) shiny!^.^

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