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HANDFUL OF STARS: 23. "Collateral Damage

Saturday, March 5, 2011

"Hardy and Davy have a painful decision to make. Meanwhile Lincoln James Petrie finds the tables turned on himself."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4300    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "COLLATERAL DAMAGE"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: None.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "BIG DAMN RESCUE".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "Hardy and Davy have a painful decision to

make. Meanwhile Lincoln James Petrie finds the tables

turned on himself."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"COLLATERAL DAMAGE"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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He was getting weaker. Much as he tried to hide it, he was slowing them down. Hardy tried to gulp down more air than his flagging lungs could hold. It set off a bout of coughing that made his friend Davy pause. "We should rest."

Hardy shook his head, he could already feel shock setting in. "No, we need to split up."

Davy's eyes widened in alarm. "If you think I'm leavin' you, you're *cuode*."

"Davy." Hardy paused as his air ran out. Why were his lungs so gorram painful? "You stay with me you're gonna get caught, *dong ma*? Best we split up, double the chances one of us'll escape."

There were tears in Davy's eyes. "You can't ask me to do that."

"I can an' will. It ain't what either of us want but it's the only choice we got. Now go! I saw a cave off to the left a half mile back, you carry on an' find somewhere to hide up but make it good. Cover your tracks, *dong ma*?"

"Hardy..."

"Go! The more you argue the less chance we'll have. Just find somewhere to hole up, I'll do the same. Stay hidden a day, maybe too. We'll wait 'em out."

Davy gave a slow sorrowful nod, knowing he was not so much agreeing with his friend as saying goodbye. "You got enough shells?"

"Yeah, you?"

His friend nodded then without any fur

Comments
Saturday, 05 March 2011 21:47
Yes, Zoe. Mwahaha, Petrie downfall in ignorance.

Poor Ritchie, but on the other hand, if he's gone, then considering what happened to his wife that isn't so bad. But something tells me that the cry he heard is still going to be important. I wonder where the other eye is.
Tuesday, 08 March 2011 13:33
You always seem to know how to thrill us and you say I give you nightmares. LOL!! Loved this as always, but thinking you ain't done with the thrills just yet.
Wednesday, 09 March 2011 00:55
Thanks for the feedback Bytemite. As for what happened to Audrey's other eye it was too badly damaged, he kept the other one because it was all that was left of her that was still intact and then decided to give it to Ritchie to twist the knife. I know, yuck" Glad you loved it Agnellemarcs, as for the nightmare stakes I think we both like to throw collective spanners in the works in that regard. All adds to the drama and no, not done with the thrills just yet! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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