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THE NINE HELLS SERIES: 1. "Independence"

Wednesday, July 23, 2003

The crew of Serenity finalise a tricky deal not realising that the Captain will pay for it later.

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TITLE: "INDEPENDENCE"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New.

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The crew of Serenity finalise a tricky deal not

realising that the Captain will pay for it later."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"INDEPENDENCE"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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He was slowly getting used to the manners of the man. The many intonations of that softly spoken voice that could inject calm leadership into the frantic heat of battle. An oddly affecting drift of tenderness in a sentence otherwise devoid of concern and certainly not grammatically correct. The soft play of humour inserted into grim reality like a buffer against the harshness of it all. For their sakes not his. The quiet steel of a man not to be crossed. Or toyed with. A fierce unspoken protectiveness for what was his and that included his crew. Underpinning it all was the man's personal code of honour. Battered, yes. Tarnished, no doubt. Intact? Hell, yes. Mostly. A lot like the man himself except for one thing. He hid his battle scars like the modest man he was at heart. He did not parade them as signs of manhood. Would show no weakness. The war had given him that. And like the rest of his few possessions it was held close to his chest. His crew saw what he thought was best for them to see. Pain was nothing to be shared. Was he afraid it would infect them too? Or concerned that they would get too close? Come to understand the very depths of his being in a way too intimate for his liking? What it was that made their Captain keep flying? So many nuances. Uncharted depths. The pool of this man's eyes was very

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 23 July 2003 06:07
BC

Heavy stuff.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 23 July 2003 19:40
I did not have an opportunity to read this all the way through. Is this "Slash"?
Wednesday, 23 July 2003 21:29
No, this is not slash but the first in a series. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 23 July 2003 23:48
Yowsers! Love it.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 24 July 2003 15:34
really really good. not so much fluffy and not so much nice and not so much sexy but very good and a bit disturbing and very deep and very real and very much crying for continuation.

I loved it. will read on now, there seems to be another one there...

Idefix
Monday, 28 July 2003 00:32
Very moving - looking forward to more.
Tuesday, 29 July 2003 04:50
Sneaky Simon! I'm hoping River makes a larger appearance in the next 2 chapters. :)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 03 August 2003 05:33
That was very, very, good. You are very talented. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to reading the rest of them.
Gate74
Thursday, 13 October 2011 07:17
I feel kind of weird commenting on an older fic, but I've read some of your fics before and I *LOVE* your writing style, so I decided to go through and read some of your older stuff:D.
THIS. IS. SO. VERY. SHINY!!! completely true to the series:D great job! I especially liked Simon drugging Mal, and the stuff about Serenity Valley. I'm going to go read the rest of this series now:D
Thursday, 13 October 2011 19:27
Thank you for all the shiny comments Anonymous, meretean, Eleri and no, it is not weird commenting on older fics, ShinyZoeKaylee. It is after all the only way to let the writer know that you enjoyed them. Feedback is always appreciated, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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