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HANDFUL OF STARS: 16. "The Mark of a Man"

Thursday, December 23, 2010

"Ritchie goes looking for Mal but finds Monty instead. Kaylee plans to get cosy with Simon. The messenger tells his story and Petrie decides it is time to get more creative."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4336    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "THE MARK OF A MAN"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: None.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "UPSTAGING THE DEVIL".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "Ritchie goes looking for Mal but finds Monty

instead. Kaylee plans to get cosy with Simon. The messenger

tells his story and Petrie decides it is time to get more creative."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"THE MARK OF A MAN"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Ritchie Thomas was a man in a hurry. Hardly anyone was on the streets, it being late and darkness bringing more than shadows to dog their steps. The Sheriff didn't notice. Didn't rightly care. His step was firm and brisk, his manner determined, pre-occupied. One or two of the townsfolk peered from candlelit windows and wondered but none stepped out of their doors to ask. Word had gone around like wildfire that there were wild wolves roaming. Had already attacked a man leaving him for dead. As the story spread the injuries grew until it was several people attacked, some dead and some wishing they had died. That it was only one man seemed to have got lost in the panic.

When he reached the place where he had last seen Serenity, Ritchie stopped and stared. He turned his head this way and that, wondered if he had lost his bearings but no, there was that scruffy Kingfisher over a ways. Some friend of Reynolds. So where was the gorram Firefly?

He stood irresolute for a minute or two then decided to speak to the crew of the Kingfisher. If Mal and his crew had somehow got wind of what Petrie was up to maybe they had made good their escape. At least that was what he was hoping. As he neared

Comments
Friday, 24 December 2010 01:14
Don't think I've commented yet but I'm loving this story and watching the plot unfold. Poor Mal! One question - did River keep "hanging around" after Simon and Kaylee...woke up?
Friday, 24 December 2010 01:22
Good to see you commenting, fearthebunnyman. No, River whisked herself away just before they woke though I think it will take a while before she wipes the smile off her face. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Saturday, 25 December 2010 15:36
Awww..... with the Simon, Kaylee, and River. Very cute indeed. As for Mal, you just enjoy torturing the man, dont you? Great stuff and here's hoping it starts lookin' up for our BDHs.
Saturday, 25 December 2010 23:13
Thanks, Angellemarcs, and a Very Happy Christmas to One and All. As for things looking up for our BDHs, in more ways than you can imagine! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Tuesday, 28 December 2010 16:24
Going back to catch up on this story. Very creepy bad guy you have here. Very good work.
Wednesday, 05 January 2011 04:37
Well, now, that was just all manner of morbid and creepifying. Good work! :)

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