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HANDFUL OF STARS: 15. "Upstaging the Devil"

Saturday, December 11, 2010

"The Captain finally wakes and has something of a heart to heart with Inara. The messenger finds himself receiving help unasked for. As Petrie's rage cools he comes up with another diabolical plan."

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TITLE: "UPSTAGING THE DEVIL"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: None.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "POSSUM".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "The Captain finally awakes and has something

of a heart to heart with Inara. The messenger finds himself

receiving help unasked for. As Petrie's rage cools he comes

up with another diabolical plan."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"UPSTAGING THE DEVIL"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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He was in shock. A grief so deep it had no bottom and no end. How long Ritchie Thomas stared in horror at the box he did not know. The eye. As distinctive to him as Audrey's beautiful face, her sparkling wit and happy disposition. So unlike her solemn father yet their eyes showed their heritage. Green with flecks of hazel. They had attracted him a split second before the smile that blossomed on her lovely face, her voice tinkling like silvery bells, her hair hanging lush and lustrous in waves that bounced with health and vitality at the slightest movement of her head. All gone. Ripped away by the insane actions of one *canku tamade hundan*. All night he sat there staring until his eyes were dry of tears and his heart empty of all emotion except one: anger. It lay beneath his awareness like a second skin. As the cold at last impinged on his befogged and stunned consciousness he moved - slow, aborted little attempts to tear himself away from a scene so horrific it would be engraved in blood on his mind forever. Ritchie shuddered and rose slowly, his joints aching and stiff.

The box was closed now and for good measure he had locked it with shaking hands. It took several

Comments
Sunday, 12 December 2010 17:52
I'd like to see Ritchie get some revenge. >D
Sunday, 12 December 2010 21:10
Always like Mal and 'Nara convos... this one is priceless. I like the fact that Mal still thinks it's nothing much. Man gets almost dead and it's still no big deal. Love it, my friend.
Sunday, 12 December 2010 23:34
Thanks for the shiny feedback, it is much appreciated! Ritchie will get a kind of revenge Bytemite. As for Mal and Inara, Angellemarcs, I always liked how their emotions could turn on a dime with all manner of emotional undercurrents neither will admit to. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Tuesday, 14 December 2010 18:06
Late for the party again, good sense of Mal and Inara in this chapter.

Like Byte says, hope Mal and Ritchie get some resolution (I don't like the word revenge)

post more

Tuesday, 14 December 2010 21:18
You aren't late Platonist, good to have your comments. More to come in a day or so! Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Wednesday, 15 December 2010 02:08
OK, so now I am caught up with this storyline and eagerly awaiting more. Your writing is always so vivid, so riveting! Kudos!
Wednesday, 15 December 2010 20:52
Darn school's been keeping me away but I'm catching up ;) Loved the Mal Inara convo, it was totally in character! Got me interested in Ritchie...is he coming up with something?

Mighty fine work!
Thursday, 16 December 2010 00:06
Good to see you slumming and thanks for the feedback. As for Ritchie, Anonym, you are going to see a side of him appear that no one has seen yet. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Thursday, 16 December 2010 17:34
Great chapter! Thoroughly enjoyed the conversation between Mal and Inara!
So, what has Petrie come up with now to torment others with? Can't you just kill him? (I know. Sometimes I sound just like Jayne!) *grin*
Friday, 17 December 2010 00:47
Neesirie, that is spooky - you DO sound like Jayne but without the grenades! LOL. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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